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For every woman, there is A 
man, who will join her,at the 
throne,As their alter for 
life,becomes blessed in the 
eyes of god,around family and 
friends,they are cherry to the 
bitter end,with nothing to 
fear,as their love for one 
another,becomes a blooming 
bundle,that grows to sprout,
like stars,continuously,forever,
To death do us part,in sickness,
and health, I will cherish you 
always, my love...


Dedication to Richard Palmer and me...

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  1. Date: 11/26/2012 12:39:00 PM

    I think Richard will like this.. :o)

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/27/2012 6:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think so too Dan, thanks for stopping by again... Light and love... Oh and congrats on the lifer....haha good choice Carma
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:36:00 AM

    Very beautiful..great expression of your feelings. Thanks for your comments on my poem "Engulfing Doom." Hugs, Holly Moore

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/27/2012 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You sincerely Holly.
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:24:00 PM

    Ahh, love. A beautiful everything (state of mind, feeling, outward expression...) Love it, Carma. Love ya, Toquyen

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/27/2012 6:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Toquyen , great appreation, and love... Love ya too, Carma
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 1:51:00 PM

    "To death do us part,in sickness and health....." - Are the words "real" in today? - Carma is a lovely poem. - Wishing you a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/27/2012 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise those are words most defiantly real in today's society best of wishes to you carma
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 1:34:00 PM

    The recipient of this poem is such a very fortunate guy to have found such love. This is a beautiful love poem.

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/27/2012 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes he is, thank you kindly for your comment always Jon admired, Carma
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 11:35:00 AM

    ‡ 'US,' Tis Sooo Lovely! Taking Eternals Limo From Love's Beautiful Cathedral, Sweet Beautiful Carma. I Love The Procession In Sequence Your Words As Though Walking Down Sanguines Aisle, Unto The Altar Of Everlastings Beautiful Love! Quite Wonderful Your Love's. 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/25/2012 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rachel as always, love your tranquilized comments, Happy Holidays too you as well, love always my dear... Carma