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Along the Ocean Shore

strolling all alone at the ocean shore embracing the cold breeze of a new sunrise I feel the freshness of the soft and gentle wind touching tenderly my whole being as you again fill my mind I hear the yodel of the small waves every melody conveys message leaving behind the memories I’ll forever cherish once in a while, waves walk towards me I can feel the tenderness of their kisses they wrap around with soft sand on my feet great relief and happiness I feel the scent of the peaceful ocean wafted on air I smell its therapeutic power for all my pains as I start to see a new sunshine I’m sure tomorrow I’ll be fine only scars are left behind to remind me to keep stronger as I’ll move on in my life
Nov. 25, 2012 First Place Contest: Any Poem Goes Judged:3/6/13 Poet Sponsor: My Greatest Poet PD This is also an entry for Synesthesia Poem Contest

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:23:00 AM

    Congrats Leo luv what a cracking write this is xx

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:03:00 AM

    Congrats my deaR friend on your great win....good luck to all your entries :) God bless you always!!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 8:18:00 AM

    Congrats on a wonderful write.

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 1:45:00 AM

    Leonora congrats on you win. Connie

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:45:00 PM

    I could not help it but love your poem, once again. Leonora, my favorite and dearest sis... thank you for taking the time in entering my contest... xox~pd

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:42:00 PM

    congrats on your win LG...

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 5:53:00 PM

    Powerful write Leonora, I can smell the sea and the emotions!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:53:00 PM

    Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 4:49:00 AM

    just amazing

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 4:49:00 PM

    I see you are sea lover, Leonora...Me too!...Like you I believe it has healing powers, both physical and mental...Wonderful poem, my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 12:06:00 PM

    such an Inspiring and free feeling write Leonora, I had a strong sense of your emotional input through the lines you have crafted here; I must also thank you for giving me the winning placement in your contest many thanks Joe..

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 12:26:00 PM

    A beautiful morning for tender thoughts. You have done a great job on this one.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:32:00 AM

    What a lovely poem you have penned here. Brings back fond memories from Myrtle Beach. From your line "only scars are left behind" I visualize getting the scars only when in the wrong waters and getting in too deep. Great write!

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 12:56:00 AM

    Liked this poignant write, Leonora, thnx for the visit!!Jag

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:12:00 AM

    hey, sweetie, I have to go off now but I just wanted to say hello. Hoping to see a new post from you soon. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:41:00 AM

    This Poem is a Gem created by you my friend. While reading its beautiful lines I was feeling the touch of the wind and the sound of the waves roaring on the surface of the sea. Great write Leonora. The cool effect of this Poem is no less than a mild pain balm for those who feel a joy in the lap of Nature and thank you for your valuable appreciations of my PINK PINK PINK poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K..... Leonora Galinta

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:27:00 AM

    Leonara, it must be very relief to be in the place where you stood and spilled the beauty on your sole. I found some sadness in here, but for your brave heart said everything are going to be alright, indeed you are. You are the independent soul whose strong and well grown in your maturity of mind, all written clear among your verses dear Leo, I wish you will regained your spirit back stitch by stitch, soon- Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 12:17:00 PM

    wonderful free verse here from you Leo..it relaxed me..loved the sense of optimism and the peace in the write..

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 9:25:00 AM

    Beautiful scene and thoughts are packed with nice words here,Lenora

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 4:32:00 AM

    Such a beautiful and serene write this Leonora. loved reading this soft and lovely poem full of hope from you. Thank you for your congratulatory note on my page while I was away from soup.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:52:00 PM

    Hello Leo... missing you... are you okay?? Have not heard from you... sending you soup mail...xox~pd

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 4:28:00 PM

    Great write Leonora, i love seaside strolls, gets the creative juices flowing, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 1:52:00 PM

    this is wonderfulll Leonora, such emotions brings this poem to life...

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 11:32:00 AM

    Such a truthful write the ocean has as many seemly emotional reactions as we do! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 6:35:00 AM

    cool introspection here thankyou for your coments mate4 xx davidscott

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 10:26:00 AM

    Hi Leonora lovely healing words, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:13:00 PM

    A great write Leonora! Big hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 7:45:00 PM

    Hi..sis... still loving the scent of this poem... strolling with an open mind... stopping by to say hi.... xox~PD

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:27:00 PM

    Hey hey, today I took the time to read your poem, I liked it! hug from me Laila

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:03:00 PM

    HELLO LEO,,, my sisie-pooh.... how are you... wow... I love the inner embrace of the new sunrise. I am really happy of the image you express and painted right here.. I like the cute yodeling from the waves... I wish my muse was back. I have a poem i posted, but I feel it to be a failure.. I can't seem to pour them out the way I use to back then... I'm gonna read this one again before I log off tonight... xox~PD

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