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Autumn leaves

november gale force 
cold air all over the place 
naked trees message

paths in front of me
tapestries of whirling leaves 
carpets of small twigs 

everything blown off
premature delivering
a wintery blues 

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 2012 

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 9:09:00 PM

    Ellie,,, deep haikus.. thank you for sharing..pd

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/1/2012 1:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    irritating typing error...... shoot should be shot.
    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/1/2012 1:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY for making time to read AND writing your comment...........`deep haiku´s / a deep and warm TY ´cause coming from an expert like yourself and (too late / I know) on your win the other day with that superSHOOT of haiku of yours Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:35:00 PM

    Lovely imagery. I especially liked the line...tapestries of whirling leaves...beautiful! Enjoyed reading this! Hugs!

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/27/2012 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Great to know my poem pleased you! TY for spending time reading and commenting! :+) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:29:00 PM

    A month in my minds eye. Great words. Read;{>

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/27/2012 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Great poetic response too. TY TY TY :+) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:15:00 PM

    not only see the image within, but feel the sentiment within....beautiful are these....

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/25/2012 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY for taking time to read and write a comment WITH such a content. This means a lot - a lot! TY so much. :+) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:51:00 AM

    Ellie, beautiful haiku's, so visual. well done. Constance

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/25/2012 6:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Great you saw it too.......... TY for taking the time to read and comment with content! :+) Ellie daphne
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 4:29:00 AM

    I can see the scene..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/25/2012 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Sara! Then you a great view and moment too :-) THIS is what it is all about - to me - being a poetess. Your comment made my day - also (writing the poem did it earlier this morning). Greetings from stormy, cold Netherlands. Ellie Daphne