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Scent of Romance

                                             The scent of romance
                                              Electrifies each fiber
                                                  Sheer delirium!

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  1. Date: 5/10/2013 6:07:00 PM

    no title [use line 1 or a number like haiku #2] no capital letters except for Proper nouns ..and on this verse since the scent of romance it's not a good haiku line, you could put [the scent of ripe melon/rises from between the sheets -- the springs creak] see the difference? Light & Love [sensory...]

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 9:08:00 PM

    Eleen, wow.. love the cheering view of it all.. always~ pd

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 11/30/2012 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks ever so much for your lovely words of encouragement! I'm flying high! :)
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:44:00 AM

    ‡ Martini's At Nine, Sweet Beautiful Eileen. How I Know To My Own Depths These Beautiful Feeling. Swimming Through Your Spirit And Feels Like A Drug; 'Ecstasy.' I Love It, Your Beauty's Poem. 'The Scent Of Romance.' Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 11/25/2012 4:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Rachel...you are ever sweet! Thanks so much for your continual support and encouragement! I'm touched! :) Have a fantastic day. Hugs!