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Victoria's Secrets

Summer times gentle breeze; the sounding of the stores 
French doors tubular bells; stilling my breath, her sight..
Flowing dark hair painted, almond eyes raspberry lips
Pearls in cream, her pure white skin; mesmerizing as 
She passed by, upon her way unto the lingerie; satin
Velvet rose boutique; perfect her beautiful physique
Lovely, her ample breast; noticing she was searching
Through the brassieres, I made my way over as to ask 
If she needed help finding something ? My heart racing
While suddenly she said, how pretty I was, and if I could 
Choose for her what she should buy or, what looked best..
Slipping from her dress,  my senses overcome as I locked 
The changing rooms door; knowing then when she smiled
That she as myself we both,  wanted much more;   gliding
Her fingers through my hair, her breath upon my lips her
Taste within my mouth;  sweet the ecstasy,  as removing
My clothes slowly to the carpet we lay spreading my silk
Thighs her warm soft hands, while I sought the sky; sigh
Vanilla scent, perfumed cries butterfly kisses, pink delight..
Moist the petals arching her hips, sliding my tongue, deeply
Into her beauty's love;  clutching, squeezing, swirling; flowing.



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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:21:00 PM

    Hmmm... I wonder, are they looking for another helping hand (or anything) at the boutique... if so, where to apply? Within?... Terry (Another passion pink poem, dear Rachel... wonderful)

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:07:00 PM

    great erotic imagery you have penned.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:02:00 PM

    Another cool, burning, sensual, erotic, piece, Rachel...what else can I say!? Enjoyed! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 4:20:00 PM

    Exotic as usual Rachel, I enjoy reading them this morning :D thank you Rachel for your visit today, they are always delightful :D-Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:44:00 PM

    Ahhh, much better, pass me a cigarette. Oh wait, I don't smoke. This poem however is smoking hot!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:42:00 PM

    Passionate..I did not read it all ...It started to get too vulgar so I ended my journey..Sara

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:57:00 AM

    I have a sudden urge to go shopping! I thought you erupted prematurely, I would have enjoyed a few more lines;))

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:24:00 PM

    Hey hey Rachel, today I took the time to read your poem nicely penned!Hugs Laila

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:31:00 AM

    i think i wandered into the wrong dressing room....

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:14:00 PM

    Rachel... wow... hot hot hot... what the :-) :-)..pd

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:11:00 PM

    Beautiful seduction Rachel, your describe a vision that you can't get enough of, lovely form and work.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:18:00 AM

    lol,it's no longer a secret,not yours nor Victoria,lol,sexy write Ms St.Cross

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:48:00 AM

    I like the romance very exciting.Thoughts that over comes us all at times

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 8:32:00 PM

    quite interesting. made me think.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 8:31:00 PM

    the title drew me in, your images are beautiful yet mysterious, much like the store, title...nicely penned!