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A Road To Be Discovered

A Road To Be Discovered The last of winter’s snowflakes transform into heavy raindrops Thus giving way to a translucent journey of a road to be discovered Eventually the storm’s torrential rain will finally stop Leaving the rays of hope from the sun to view a road uncovered I close my eyes and remember endless days of walking until I felt old Only to open my eyes and find that I was still lost in my path So many endless hopes I had of finding a place for my dreams to unfold Only to find them covered once more under the cold winter’s stormy wrath At last I can see that road before me, one that I knew since I was born A path that I’ve dreamed of walking that led me to my goals My feet automatically begins to move in steps where the snow once formed Leading me to my greatest treasure that would fulfill my soul Through the inspiration from the sun’s rays that showed a road uncovered That dried the rain which drowned a winter’s last sting I was able to view a road to be discovered From nature’s translucent window of what destiny was meant to bring Contest: A Road Driven Sponsor: Michael Falotico

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  1. Date: 12/26/2012 6:20:00 PM

    A poem of despair, yet renewing hope. With each death, signified by winter, always the hope of new life, spring on the way. I may not have understood completely, but nice poem.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 6:56:00 PM

    Congrats Gail on a beautiful written write. Hugs

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:38:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Michael's "A Road Still Driven" contest Gail Angel. Love, Carol

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/13/2012 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Carol, thank you for congratulating me on my win today in Michael's contest. Love to you always, Gail
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 3:04:00 PM

    Gail, u and I need to jump in on the Santa hat craze, hahah...Very pleased to see this delightful poem do sooo very well...one thing that I enjoy about your writing in particular is how u portray the seasons...this one is no exception...great work, gal. Congrats! gwendolen

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/13/2012 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gwendolen, hank you for congratulating me on my win today in Michael's contest. Wishing you a very warm and happy holidays. Love always, Gail
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 3:04:00 PM

    Gail, u and I need to jump in on the Santa hat craze, hahah...Very pleased to see this delightful poem do sooo very well...one thing that I enjoy about your writing in particular is how u portray the seasons...this one is no exception...great work, gal. Congrats! gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 7:14:00 AM

    Congratulations friend Gail on your win :) It's very beautiful poem..hugs, Maria

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/11/2012 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Maria, thank you for congratulating me on my win today in Michael's contest. I love your new avatar. Have a wonderful day. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 3:25:00 AM

    Congrats Gail, enjoyed the read...Seren

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/11/2012 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Seren, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's contest. Wishing you a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 2:58:00 AM

    I love this Gail! Finding the right path to tread that is just what we want is not easy, many end up on the wrong path. I love how you've entwined nature with the theme. Very nice. Congrats on you win!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/11/2012 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Vicky congrats on your first place win in Michael contest luv. Your poem was very wonderfully penned and thank you for congratulating me on my win as well. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:19:00 AM

    Hi there sweetheart congratulations, in the winners circle once again xx

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/11/2012 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mandy, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's contest. Wishing you a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:13:00 PM

    Gail, it is nice to see you on Michael's winning list... a warm congratulations and good night~:-) PD

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/11/2012 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PD thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's contest. Wishing you a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:10:00 PM

    One of your best writes! Blessed Be Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/11/2012 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debbie, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's contest. Wishing you a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 4:31:00 PM

    AWESOME! CONGRATULATIONS!!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/11/2012 9:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Frank, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's contest. Wishing you a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 4:17:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Gail

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/11/2012 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joseph, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's contest. Wishing you a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:58:00 PM

    Congrats on 6th place in my contest.. hugs from Santa Michael

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:27:00 AM

    Well done introspective piece. Wether you win or not anyone who reads this will be a winner.

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/27/2012 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Richard, thank you for enjoying my poem A Road To Be Discovered. Have a wonderful day. Hugs, Gail
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:11:00 PM

    Reads like winning material for Michael's contest..Great idea for a topic..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..I hope that you have had a great day..Sara

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/27/2012 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sara, thank you for enjoying my poem A Road To Be Discovered. Have a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 1:02:00 PM

    Love this !! I like the flow and the journey throughout the poem. Enjoyed !!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/27/2012 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debra, thank you for enjoying my poem A Road To Be Discovered. Have a wonderful day.
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:08:00 AM

    Hi Gail a brilliant wirte, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/27/2012 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Owen, thank you for enjoying my poem A Road To Be Discovered. Have a wonderful day.
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:49:00 AM

    this is lovely gail, michael will love this too...

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/27/2012 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Harry, thank you for enjoying my poem A Road To Be Discovered. Have a wonderful day.
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 7:10:00 PM

    Gail--this is a great theme. I love the translucent window. It's a wonderful symbol for the struggle for vision in choice. It reminds me of fog. Thanks for your comment. Have a great evening.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:18:00 PM

    A very very nice write Gail, so full of hope and fulfilled dreams, blessings Carl,

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:31:00 PM

    Love it,dear Gail! A road straight into Michael`s poetic heart;-) Thanks for you kind comment my good friend.Hugs and Love~Arild

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 12:23:00 PM

    Gail it's been a while since I visited you and I am sure glad I chose this one, well done and good luck...David

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/25/2012 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    David, it was refreshing to see you here on the soup my friend and thank you for commenting on my poem A Road To Be Discovered. Have a beautiful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 12:07:00 PM

    What a brilliant write, such a perfect piece my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and delightful poem this afternoon! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/25/2012 1:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Russell, thank you for enjoying my poem A Road To Be Discovered, it is greatly appreciated. Have yourself a beautiful day. Hugs always, Gail
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:45:00 AM

    A stellar write which i extremely enjoy reading tonight my dear Gail! I extremely love every line of your poem especially the last stanza telling the inspiration of the sun's rays and your very creative way of visualizing the wonderful journey. A winning masterpiece for me! I am very grateful for your precious time visiting and leaving a very inspiring comment on my latest work. It's my great honor! May God bless you and your family always. love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:14:00 AM

    Gail this MUST be a winning poem! - A very beautiful and perfectly written. - I admire your writing style, really! :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/25/2012 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne, thank you for such an uplifting comment on my poem A Road To Be Discovered. Wishing you a beautiful day sweetie. Love always, Gail
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 12:32:00 AM

    Hey, Gail. This is for a new contest? I can see it is one I did not look into yet. but gosh, It looks like a really good entry for it. Glad I saw this one tonight.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:48:00 PM

    WONDERFUL! Before It was finished I thought it would be great for the contest. You didn't need much time to write at this high caliber! I'm so slow...I'm still trying to define a road from a trail... GOOD LUCK To You in the contest...and I really appreciate you coming by.

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/25/2012 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Frank, thank you for your comment on my poem A Road To Be Discovered. You are too funny when you wrote "I'm still trying to define a road from a trail" lol Love your humor Frank. Have a beautiful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:45:00 PM

    great write Gail gonna do well in the contest

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/25/2012 9:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Richard, thank you for enjoying my poem today. Wishing you a beautiful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 11/24/2012 6:26:00 PM

    Lovely poem. Love the last line. Bravo!

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/25/2012 9:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jon, thank you for enjoying my poem A Road To Be Discovered. Have a beautiful day. Hugs, Gail