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'Snow My Beloved'

I open the gate to the park Winter twilight is dense and full The sky falls to a shadow And trees and ground blend Ebbing into vagueness . . . The path is wet under my feet Little frills of ice adorn things Crystalline and frosty Suddenly full of snowflakes Enchanting and beautiful . . . I am left breathless Snow floating amongst the trees I can feel his sweet touch On my hair, on my cheek No sound except his silence I stand still in his embrace . . . All my world is quiet and tranquil Except my beloved whispering snow Drifting, floating, hovering about me I whisper, "I love you" But I know in my heart he will go And be but a memory lost . . . Free Verse November 24, 2012

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:20:00 AM

    most romantic as two lost in beauty of snow ..your lines r so captivating .. I never want the poems to end Constance ..

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 7:07:00 AM

    awesome write here, Constance. I doubt if we'll get snow here, but I sure love your descriptions of it

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 4:58:00 PM

    ‡ A Winter Wonderland Brushed As To Be Worthy Of A Hallmarks Holiday Card; A Kiss Unto One's Love, Sweet Beautiful Constance! I Find A Tranquillity Here Also; Atop A Lovely Bed, In Powdered Soft Snow. Feeling Anothers Touch, Words Of 'I Love You;' Floating As Gentle Pristine Flakes Into Heart's, A Most Beautiful View. I Am Going To Favour Its Crystal Splendours As Also This Yourself. Thank You For Your Beauty's Kind Visit. 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 4:46:00 PM

    I was really happy for you until that last line. Absolutly lovely poem, I very much enjoyed it.