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A Bottle Of

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A Bottle Of



                 I saw a man who made large sailing ships inside a bottle ....
              Large sails, the ship was fully manned and the flag was hoisted
                  I put my thoughts, feelings and words into a bottle ....
                              Slowly, carefully I filled the bottle ...
                       The thoughts, feelings and words flowed out .....









24.11.2012
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 7/15/2014 1:26:00 PM
    Very fine, Anne Lise. Your thoughts feelings and words were transformed into a wonderful poem. And the ship now sails. Very well written, my friend.... Robert.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 7/15/2014 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Robert, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem - "A Bottle Of" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/3/2014 9:06:00 AM
    Anne Lise Such a creative and sweet write. Thank you for the kind comment on my Umbrella poem.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/3/2014 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Robin. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 2:59:00 AM
    Very very nice Annie,,,, congratulations on the nice win,,,, you have a blessed day xoxoxo's ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/7/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/28/2012 2:06:00 PM
    Congrats Anne, sorry im late reading this and me being a sailor and all, very nicely done,Blessings Carl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/28/2012 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations,Carl - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Wish you could send me a bottle. here's one full of love for you. best wishes great poem. Pete.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/19/2012 1:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Peter. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 11:06:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, sorry or late. It's really wonderful heart bottle. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/9/2012 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations, bl -never too late - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Anne Lise. Love Carol

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2012 6:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations,Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 3:07:00 PM
    Congratulations on your very imaginative win!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/3/2012 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations,Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:02:00 AM
    Very nice work. A well deserved win for you. Congratulations!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/3/2012 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/2/2012 6:30:00 PM
    Anne.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/3/2012 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:26:00 PM
    this truly was one of your best and a well deserved win, COngrats, sweetie

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/2/2012 3:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 9:48:00 AM
    congrats on a great win Anne

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2012 10:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:26:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your winning place Anne Lise, love it xx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2012 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations Mandy- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2012 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Craig. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:23:00 AM
    Wonderful Anne Lise!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2012 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Craig. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 4:15:00 AM
    A bottle for your thoughts instead of a penny....nicely put! Congrats on your win. Hugs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2012 5:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 3:16:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Anne, like it!! Jag

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2012 5:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 12:28:00 AM
    Congrats I enjoyed your piem....Seren

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2012 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/1/2012 12:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oops typo or i should say ipado. Should read poem sorry.
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:14:00 PM
    See I new you were always a winner! PLease do write for my new 6 line contest on LIGHT Congrad's on your skillfull win! Light & Love

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2012 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win! I love this poem..Hugs, Holly

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2012 2:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 3:23:00 PM
    You have a pretty good imagination though. I will definitely read more of your poems. God bless - Dio

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/29/2012 2:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Dio. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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