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About This Poem

A Bottle Of



                 I saw a man who made large sailing ships inside a bottle ....
              Large sails, the ship was fully manned and the flag was hoisted
                  I put my thoughts, feelings and words into a bottle ....
                              Slowly, carefully I filled the bottle ...
                       The thoughts, feelings and words flowed out .....









24.11.2012
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. vaso Avatar
    arthur vaso
    Date: 2/18/2013 10:07:00 PM
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    I really liked this one!!! great read

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2013 2:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Arthur. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/7/2013 2:59:00 AM
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    Very very nice Annie,,,, congratulations on the nice win,,,, you have a blessed day xoxoxo's ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/7/2013 6:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Carl Fraser
    Date: 12/28/2012 2:06:00 PM
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    Congrats Anne, sorry im late reading this and me being a sailor and all, very nicely done,Blessings Carl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/28/2012 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations,Carl - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Peter Dome
    Date: 12/19/2012 1:22:00 PM
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    Wish you could send me a bottle. here's one full of love for you. best wishes great poem. Pete.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/19/2012 1:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Peter. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Becca Lucas
    Date: 12/17/2012 12:50:00 PM
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    sorry, I'm really late in reading and congratulating you on this gem! Nice one!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/17/2012 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, Rebecca -never too late - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    bl devnath
    Date: 12/9/2012 11:06:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win, sorry or late. It's really wonderful heart bottle. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/9/2012 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations, bl -never too late - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 12/7/2012 6:02:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Anne Lise. Love Carol

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/7/2012 6:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations,Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Carol Eastman
    Date: 12/3/2012 3:07:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your very imaginative win!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations,Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Sean Goodwin
    Date: 12/3/2012 9:02:00 AM
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    Very nice work. A well deserved win for you. Congratulations!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/2/2012 6:30:00 PM
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    Anne.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/3/2012 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/1/2012 5:26:00 PM
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    this truly was one of your best and a well deserved win, COngrats, sweetie

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/2/2012 3:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Joseph May
    Date: 12/1/2012 9:48:00 AM
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    congrats on a great win Anne

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2012 10:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/1/2012 7:26:00 AM
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    Big congratulations on your winning place Anne Lise, love it xx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2012 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations Mandy- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2012 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Craig. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    craig cornish
    Date: 12/1/2012 7:23:00 AM
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    Wonderful Anne Lise!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2012 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Craig. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Cecilia Macfarlane
    Date: 12/1/2012 4:15:00 AM
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    A bottle for your thoughts instead of a penny....nicely put! Congrats on your win. Hugs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2012 5:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 12/1/2012 3:16:00 AM
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    Congrats on your win, Anne, like it!! Jag

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2012 5:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 12/1/2012 2:30:00 AM
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    congrads on your win dear Anna..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2012 2:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/1/2012 12:28:00 AM
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    Congrats I enjoyed your piem....Seren

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2012 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/1/2012 12:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oops typo or i should say ipado. Should read poem sorry.
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/30/2012 7:14:00 PM
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    See I new you were always a winner! PLease do write for my new 6 line contest on LIGHT Congrad's on your skillfull win! Light & Love

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2012 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    HOLLY MOORE
    Date: 11/30/2012 6:01:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your win! I love this poem..Hugs, Holly

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2012 2:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Diogenes Zuniga
    Date: 11/28/2012 3:23:00 PM
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    You have a pretty good imagination though. I will definitely read more of your poems. God bless - Dio

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/29/2012 2:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Dio. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Gail DeBole
    Date: 11/28/2012 8:30:00 AM
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    Hi Anne - Yet another novel idea from the workings of your mind! Love it. - Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/28/2012 9:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Gail. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/27/2012 3:35:00 PM
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    It appears a mere bottle is incapable of holding back all that you have to say. I like your Poem

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/28/2012 2:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Richard. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 11/27/2012 2:32:00 PM
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    I love this poem Anne. Your word flowed out fluidly in this penned piece. Sending smiles, Connie

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2012 2:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Connie. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    David Nickle Read
    Date: 11/27/2012 11:54:00 AM
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    I love the way you've written this poem, wow, it all works so well.......I think I'll just read it again. Love it! Read ;{>

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2012 2:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments David. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 11/27/2012 11:17:00 AM
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    you are a very creative writer and you really amaze me sometimes with your poetry..i enjoyed this fantastic piece..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2012 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Yasmin. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Angel Simon
    Date: 11/27/2012 9:59:00 AM
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    Great poem Anne Lise... So deep... It tells me there's a minefield in me. It tells me to the adventurous in my thinking and perception of my milieu. Love. Angel. Also thanks for reading my poems... so encouraged

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2012 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Angel. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/27/2012 8:03:00 AM
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    Light poetry but deep words within :) thank you anne for your lovely visit to my haiku, glad to have your presence there :D - Hug, Yanny

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2012 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Yanny. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 11/27/2012 5:49:00 AM
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    This is very nice Anne. I would like to do the same thing. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2012 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Lucilla. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Jancarl Campi
    Date: 11/27/2012 12:57:00 AM
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    very profound poem. i liked it and thanks for your comments on my latest work. I think we did meet on the other side of the moon.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2012 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, maybe it was there .......Jancarl (?) Thank you for visiting my poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2012 1:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Debra. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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