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Fear of Goodbye

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Fear of Goodbye

whispers carry through the silent air
and linger for moments after which spoken
I take the time to let them echo inside my ear
before they fade and their presence is broken
 
shallow breaths in a rhythmic type of tune
wishing for the moment to last forever
afraid that goodbye will be said too soon
breaking the bond that ties us together
 
locked in a gaze only to be suddenly taken
away from what was cherished between
distance widens I pray to be mistaken
 from what is now being forcefully seen
 
fear running wild I struggle to meet your eyes
as the last whisper I hear is one of goodbye

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  1. Date: 6/24/2013 2:50:00 PM
    Woah.. this is a very powerful write. Beautiful.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super placement in Harry's "Goodbye" contest Nicole. I am sorry it is late. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:55:00 PM
    wow, you did a GREAT sonnet for this contest. Congrats on your win. I thought it was one of the better ones!

    marrier Avatar nicole marrier
    Date: 12/1/2012 12:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Andrea:)
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 4:03:00 AM
    congrats Nicole on your 7th place winner in my goodbye sonnet contest....

    marrier Avatar nicole marrier
    Date: 11/27/2012 12:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks you harry:)
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:29:00 AM
    Congratulations nicole, on your wonderful sonnet xx

    marrier Avatar nicole marrier
    Date: 11/27/2012 12:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you mandy:)
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 9:22:00 PM
    Nicole, congratulations ;-) In Harry's "goodbye" contest.. Good night~ PD

    marrier Avatar nicole marrier
    Date: 11/26/2012 9:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you:)
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:16:00 PM
    Great Nicole...congrats....Seren

    marrier Avatar nicole marrier
    Date: 11/26/2012 6:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you:)