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Water

Ameba live in teaming seas
With viruses - infectious germs
In stagnant pools - polluted streams
With protozoa, microbes, and disease
So, Next time your thirsty stop and think
About the water that you drink
But do not over sanitize
Our systems need some exercise

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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:02:00 AM

    Cool one Jon i think there is too much santization these days. Have written an epilogue for the cougar. xx

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/24/2012 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I read it, Great work Mandy.
  1. Date: 11/24/2012 6:36:00 AM

    I like that "our systems need some exercise". I heard someone said "we need a little germs at times." Anyway, good job, Jon. Good morning.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/24/2012 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Toquyen. Your shinning smile always brightens up my day.