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Incomplete with out you Incomplete Unsung Songs

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Incomplete with out you Incomplete Unsung Songs

Incomplete ! with out you. 
Incomplete, Unsung Songs.

Many have been the rhymes, many lyrics for you.
In the dream, you create the theme's tunes, they come through.

Within them, could have been the birth of many a beautiful song.
Many a hit written to carry us - together - along,
into a future where nothing would go wrong,
nothing - that is - that could break the heart of this song. 

Then lucidity came to this dreamer, an awakening shone,
a light !, a reality lies before, - not the dream - it lives on
into the waking hours, - what is known - it is all gone!

How does one shut down ?, close that door ?,
feel the pain, the heart ache never more.

B.J."A" 2
September ( the midnight hour ) 25th / 26th 2009

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