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Damsel's solemn wish

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Damsel's solemn wish

As lovebirds shew affection for its mate in the wild,
 I ponder of thy loving arms that embraced;
With a love so chaste and soothfast
doting with little knowledge.
Now I find myself laying by the meadows secluded.
An abnormal love for night I turned,
And indite these lines alow descending night.
Yet so fond of solitary moon so wane,
saw a shooting star luminously explode.
And makes a wish unto thee,
Of your pilgrim soul’s arrival hither hills
Where we once grew in aroha
And played by the shrubs therewithal,
Your vigor wherefrom you’d catch me a ladybird,
Moments we went berrying,
And passed valleys for quest unknown,
And youthful we reached by the hills
Whence you depart somewhither;
With nothingness left in me to grin.
And these I wish upon the shooting star,
‘’A damsel wait for her swain be met”,
Yet I know of your nihility as I turn grey.

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Sukkum love xx

    chang Avatar sukkum chang
    Date: 1/4/2013 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ma'am:-)
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:54:00 PM
    Sukkum, congratulations in the Skat, contest. Take Care PD

    chang Avatar sukkum chang
    Date: 1/4/2013 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you PD:-)
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:27:00 PM
    Congratulations ~SKAT~

    chang Avatar sukkum chang
    Date: 1/4/2013 6:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ohh i didnt knw tat..thank you:-)
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 12:14:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup and a nice write.

    chang Avatar sukkum chang
    Date: 11/26/2012 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for you generosity..