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Venus



                                                         I saw a beauty
                                             hailed and worshiped by many
                                                     Venus is her name
                                                   goddess of prosperity 
                                                    encompasses victory





                                                      November 24, 2012

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:43:00 PM

    Maria, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 10:12:00 AM

    lovely Tanka, awesome poem...

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:30:00 AM

    A very lovely tanka poem about Venus, Mary my friend! I love it so much! Good luck always! love, LG

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 3:58:00 PM

    ‡ Just One More Gaze Upon Beautiful Loving Venus, Sweet Beautiful Maria, Afore Glimpsing Your Beauty's Newest Poe. Sweet Kisses, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 9:59:00 PM

    Nice way to do a poem on the Goddess Venus!

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 12:20:00 PM

    Lovely .... and unique. - I like your poem very much Maria ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 11:17:00 AM

    ‡ I Believe Her Greatest Beauty Be That Within Her Loving Heart, Sweet Beautiful Maria. Eyes Which Behold, And Long That All Should Be Loved; Never Abandoned Left For Want; Not Of Self, But Of Another; 'Beautiful Venus!' I Am Going To Favour This Goddess In Beauty; Wonderful! 'Happy Holidays,' As Always. My Love, Rachel *