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PROMISING YOUNG MAN

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PROMISING YOUNG MAN

PROMISING YOUNG MAN 

  

Hear the travails of a single mother 

Traded her heaven for love 

But hopes and dreams short-lived and ran 

Now she cries aloud to every woman 

Be ware of a promising young man 

  

He promised to move me mountains 

He vowed to spring forth like fountains 

At my faintest whisper when in need 

And called on cupid to strike him stupid 

If he is short of a word or letter in his creed 

  

He stands and mopes as though lost in lust 

 It is vanity to yearn and lust over dust 

He calls my left keg wonderful 

And the right he christened as powerful 

Both together he called beautiful 

  

He said the sun rises in my glittering eyes 

That heaven is hid between my very thighs 

And will persevere till he finally makes it to heaven 

He spoke sweet sounding sermons as time ticked eleven 

Words like fetters, held hostage a lass due home for seven 

  

He said my presence did make him shiver 

And for my absence, he’ll cry me a river 

If only I would be his all in one miss 

He’ll treat me to a night of ceaseless kiss 

And our ever after will be made of an endless bliss 

  

Little did I know that the name I bore was a loan 

Soon I’ll be striped of the same and left to moan alone 

From my heaven he’s got saints numbering up to seven 

Deserted in this lonely cold night as time ticked eleven 

He’s abandoned me and all the saints in search for a new heaven 


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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 12:34:00 PM

    Oh my goodness, you weren't kidding when you said our minds were alike, this is just like my villanelle! The promises, the abandonment. Wow. Great minds think alike :) this is going into my favorites list

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 11:31:00 AM

    Welcome to poetry Soup Mbah, I look forward to reading many more of your fine writes. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:15:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Chukwuemuka. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I am sorry it is so belated. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:14:00 PM

    CM. you did well on this poem and knowing life... enjoyed...pd

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:04:00 AM

    on point Chuks. adventurism in fantasy.