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To the sadist

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To the sadist

peel off the surface of my heart
watch as its walls tumble apart,
celebrate as I fall …

snigger as I show you my fears 
smirk as I drown myself in tears
… for with you I stand small.

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  1. Date: 9/23/2013 2:33:00 PM

    Wow! Excellent concept you have brought in to a poem with very deep meaningful lines. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 6:13:00 PM

    Hello there you.. nice to meet you . when i clicked on the title of this i was ofcourse intrigued, and the read its self is definitely a great description.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:15:00 PM

    Hi Vicky - This is VERY good. Yes, you have definitely described a sadist in a way that deserves a win. Congratulations! - Gail

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Vicky. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:19:00 PM

    Congratulations on your superb write and splendid win,Vicky....

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:56:00 PM

    Vicky., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:30:00 PM

    Congrats on your win with this very creative work...Sara

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:26:00 PM

    Another stunner Vicky , Congratulations xx

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 10:54:00 AM

    Congratulations on your first place win. Good job!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:07:00 AM

    congrats Vicky on a great write and top win luv..

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:40:00 AM

    Way to go Vicky, well deserved first place. You Rock!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:32:00 AM

    Such a "sad" commentary on anyone considered a partner, right? This is so well written and the emotions it conjures up in me are strong...BRAVO on this esteemed win!! gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win friend Vicky. Cheers!!!! :) good day!

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:12:00 AM

    A sadist has no heart and no mercy. Once I was there, but now I'm here. Jesus was holfing my hand. Have a great day. Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:48:00 PM

    The sadist is pathetic... unfortunately s/he can often destroy the more sensitive amongst us... but through your poems, I feel your strength as well as sensitivity, so I'm sure you could not really be made 'small'... Terry (Good, insightful poem, Vicky)

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 12:17:00 AM

    Nice work here. Highlights the features of a sadist! Idris

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 9:54:00 AM

    love the rhyme very catche straight to the point x david scott

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 7:06:00 AM

    Emotions pour nicely from your pen.. enjoyed hugs Michael

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 6:15:00 AM

    Very touching, my dear Vicky! Hang in there, you shall overcome! Love and hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 2:26:00 PM

    Hi Vicky Soup Mail

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:30:00 AM

    Beautiful, Vicky............Beautiful That was a whole lot of message in delivered in just six lines...Reuben

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 4:41:00 PM

    Chin up Vicky, you are larger than life and stand out amazingly with your talent. Blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 3:45:00 PM

    You are far to strong to ever stand small. Allow no man or women that kind of power. As always your words evoke great emotion. I would like to learn more about you send me soup mail, I would enjoy talking with you more. Rick

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Strong piece! There are those who find comfort in our shortcomings, or assist in tearing us down!