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  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:37:00 AM
    I'm fine Sis. But I got a lot of attention when I brought it up. So I said so that's what's bothering her. I hope it's not bad. Do you get the flashes?

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:06:00 AM
    Congratulations friend Yasmin on your awesome win. Cheers!!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 2:09:00 PM
    The only thing worse than getting hurt yourself is feeling like you have lost your child [shiver] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Waking Up" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 3:05:00 AM
    Yas, big congrats on your win, loved this one first time ok?..David

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Yasmin sweetheart ss

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:18:00 AM
    Well penned Yasmin! The thought of dreams merging with reality is a horrifying one but occurs especially after a traumatic experience. You've dealt with the subject well. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:16:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Yasmin! Thank you so much for your full support! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:02:00 AM
    Reading up this poem of yours written when I was away, yes very much a mother's nightmare, as Andrea says. Well penned dear Yas. Glad to know you had a peaceful holiday time.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 10:00:00 PM
    Yasmin, this is very good. It sounds like a mother's nightmare. I hope I can come up with someone as nice as this one if I try this contest. I had a great thanksgiving. Hope you are enjoying the weekend!

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 10:42:00 AM
    This is a very scary write my friend, a sad poem! I am glad that things ended up alright and things were eventually ok! Nightmares are terrible and can manifest themselves when we are stressed or have a lot of fear within ourselves! This is a special poem Yasmin, I really enjoyed reading this incredible piece this afternoon! Thank you for sharing this intriguing write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 10:05:00 AM
    Yas, yep things at the moment are going very well, so we are making the most of our time while we can, thank you for asking, have a wonderful weekend...David

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 8:48:00 AM
    I would be honored to be the subject of anything you write... Thank you I'm in awe :•) hugs Michael

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:08:00 AM
    Yas, scary but excellent work...David

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:54:00 AM
    Wonderful Yasssssss love your work here today... hugs Michael