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XIAO LING My Fading Sun Shine

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XIAO LING My Fading Sun Shine

XIAO LING
My Fading Sun Shine

Clouds silently slipped in on the bright spot,
those last beautiful moments, with you , I got.
Now I sit in reflection, in gloom,
in my four cornered room.

 It happened and your send off was in a shower of tear
drops, sentiments that represent all that I fear.
Fear that, with me, never again will you be near,
except that is, in all the memories I hold so dear.

 B. J. "A" 2
December 14th 2010

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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 12:57:00 AM
    Sad but beautiful poem.