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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 11/26/2012 3:56:00 PM
    This is rich with relatable images of a deep betrayal. Great title. This has redemption in the end, the only kind possible: a return to your own innocence despite your wounding. Beautiful and powerful.

    Dawn Avatar Skyler Dawn
    Date: 11/26/2012 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you... It was inspired by true events... sometimes our best work comes from our own experience...
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:13:00 AM
    Skyler all I can say is 'wow'....David

    Dawn Avatar Skyler Dawn
    Date: 11/26/2012 4:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David :)