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WHEELS OF GOODBYE

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WHEELS OF GOODBYE


This summer's winding leaves a pierce behind
Charred traces of her smouldering days,
A riddling puzzle blurs clouds in her mind
When fragile heart cracks glassy tears, assailed

Somehow, this thud of fall pretends to hold
A promise, tinged with sharp crushing of bones
Where forward bites and  snaps the bitter cold,
That reels in hidden betrayals  unknown 

For with this most damn season's turn , alas
Trickery of  love disowned  in a rush,
When dusted time  counters all autumns past
She flickers higher like emblazoned brush

And every triumph over cycles’ spin
Trades wheels of goodbye for fresh beginnings.



Goodbye Contest of Harry Horsman




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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 3:38:00 PM

    Running wheels of sessions by saying good bye starts another. Excellent job done. After a long gape, meeting again. Thanks...., loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 9:53:00 AM

    A very good write, Nette. we miss u here!!! hope you're doing well :)

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 3:04:00 PM

    The scent of a dying season, the echoes of lost dreams and then a fresh beginning. It seems to resonate in my mind Nette, the repetition of our relationships but each with is own story. So nice to read your thoughtful words. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 10:08:00 AM

    Nette, how and where are you? Missing you so much here on the soup. Ba't ang tagal mong nawala?? Ano nang nangyari sa iyo? Hope you are doing well! Have a merry Christmas and a happy New Year my very dear friend! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 9:36:00 AM

    Are you alright? I no longer have the same email account and have lost your email addy! Thinking of you, hope you are well (now wondering if you are in the hospital!) please, just say hello when you can! Merry Christmas, hon, and hope you drop by soon to soup! xoxo Cyndi

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:15:00 PM

    Nette, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 4:16:00 PM

    Amazing as always, Nette. How are ya?...its been a while.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:22:00 PM

    WOW! Nette what a write! I especially was moved by line 12. Hope you are well. I'm reading tonight, mostly, and finally visiting dear friends, such as you. Hope you're well. I heard that your homeland was hit by another bad storm, but I knew you were far away from the fray-- still sad to hear of once again your country being walloped by the weather and the loss of life. If you are still in touch with Nikko, do you know how she's faring? Hugs to you, Cyndi

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 5:46:00 PM

    Such a bittersweet good bye Nette but then so many are. A beautiful entry for the contest; best wishes luv, you always find a soft spot in my emotions. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 11:08:00 AM

    This really seems goodbye with s hopeful new beginning.Powerful Nette

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:00:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super placement in Harry's "Goodbye" contest Nette. I am sorry it is late. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:52:00 AM

    Excellent Sonnet Nette. Loved the way you sum it up. and yes as I see congrats are in order.

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 12:20:00 AM

    congrats Nette luv on all your wins for majestic writes always ..

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:33:00 AM

    Beautiful, nothing more enchanting than a sonnet to hold the attention of my eye, Rxxx

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:49:00 PM

    Finally getting to some contest winners lists and glad to see you among the top ten here, Nette. BIG CONGRATS. hope your asthma is under control? Have not seen you in a while!!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:31:00 PM

    Wonderful piece,nice presentation...Always classic..Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...you are unique,my friend ..Kudos to you...

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 10:00:00 AM

    I thought this was a winner but thought it would be higher on the list--congrats

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Just loved it nettie! here the occasional mystery of 'what?' worked well for your theme. Crongrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:32:00 AM

    Congrats, friend!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:18:00 AM

    congrats nette for your 5th place in my goodbye sonnet contest

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:25:00 AM

    Congratulations nette, on your wonderful sonnet xx

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 9:20:00 PM

    Nette, congratulations ;-) In Harry's "goodbye" contest.. Good night~ PD

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:05:00 PM

    Great poem Nette, Congrats ....Seren

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:56:00 PM

    congrats nette on your 5th place winner in my goodbye sonnet contest

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 6:45:00 AM

    Hi, Nette! This is another excellent poem of yours! Two thumbs up my friend! I enjoy reading this tonight. Good luck for a big win! love always, Leonora

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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 8:19:00 AM

    Nette, Wonderful blend of images, vocabulary, metaphor and personification of seasons all wrapped up in this form!!

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:35:00 PM

    Another melodious write from you!!Best wishes in the contest of Harry.

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:42:00 PM

    This is a masterfully brilliant write, masterfully written my friend! I really enjoyed reading this legendary poem this evening! You have pleased my eyes to the utmost! What an awesome and wondrous seasonal piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:10:00 PM

    Your writings always depict the beauty of shade though many struggles seen in each stanza, love them as always :), good luck for your Goodbye contest- Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 2:21:00 PM

    its music to the ears:) very well written.

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