Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

On Monday

Elektra Real Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled On Monday which was written by poet Elektra Real. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Elektra Real

Best Elektra Real Poems

+ Fav Poet

On Monday

where are you?
the water is cold
our moment is gone
the lights shut down

even if we wait
for another bus
all seats are taken
the road is closed

the moon can't wait
the things you said
can't erase itself
your lies are true

you caught me
I held your hand
to help me stand
you made me fall

where are you?
I am cold
the moment is gone
you are gone.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:22:00 PM

    Elektra, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:31:00 PM

    I like the way you relate your passion to the moment. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 12:44:00 PM

    A touching - well written poem Elektra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 11:23:00 AM

    i feel your sadness. wishing you hapiness today. happy thanksgiving.