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Wish

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Wish

. Wish
I'd like to come to you
But, our streets are red
And I do not have
But my white dress

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 3:32:00 PM

    Thank you Mr (Richard Lamoureux) I hope you like my poem

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:24:00 PM

    sad and pretty at the same time.

    Hassan Avatar Faleeha Hassan Date: 12/6/2012 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope to like it Mr (Richard Lamoureux) Thank you
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:18:00 AM

    Dear wonderful (Joan Marie Peranteau) Thank you and your heart White

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:14:00 AM

    Thank you and I'm happy in these words my dear(daver austin)

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:37:00 AM

    Hello Faleeha my dear friend, Congradulations on your poem being featured on the soup home page. I agree with the others who commented on this poem, though short in words it speaks volumes.

    Peranteau Avatar JoanMarie Peranteau Date: 12/4/2012 5:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I meant to say: though few in words, it speaks volumes. Touches my heart.
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:36:00 AM

    Such a wealth of expression in so few lines. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 8:09:00 PM

    Thank you, and I hope for your website constant development

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:54:00 PM

    Faleeha Hassan ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA

    Hassan Avatar Faleeha Hassan Date: 12/6/2012 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I am very happy now
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 9:44:00 AM

    Oh this is so sad, and so evocative, in so few words. Well done Faleeha x

    Hassan Avatar Faleeha Hassan Date: 12/2/2012 8:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you I hope to communicate with you Ms. Kaye Locke