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3 candles

3 great women in ur life,
three candlesticks sent to bring u 
lite,
show u were u r in life and where u 
cld
be,
if u listen u can hear em whispher,
cheering u on as u journey thru da 
darknes,
listen to ur angels, u thot they were 
just
candles?
I gues that cld explain the way u
handeled em
even when their tears like wax tried 
to warn u with their burn, u were 
stil a fool
with a prize he did nt earn,
u lost 1 ( 1 candle dies)
2 great women in ur life,
2 candlesticks sent to bring u lite,
show u were u r in life and where u 
cld be,
if u listen u can hear em shouting,
cheering u on as u journey thru da
darknes,
listen to ur angels, u thot they were 
just
candles? Life has u in its snare, 
unforgivingly its
stares,
its nt as bright as it was before bt u 
can
stil c, soldier on,u can make it 
through
the rain..
The rain? Wat of those that light ur 
path
u 4got ur angels
u didnt c ur world grow darker u 
didnt
protect or cradle
the rain just stole a candle
u lost 2( another candle dies) 1 
great woman in ur life,
one candlestick sent to bring u lite,
show u were u r in life and where u 
cld
be,
if u listen u can hear her screaming,
cheering u on as u journey thru da 
darknes,
listen to ur angel, she is more than 
jus a
candle..
Ur world is so much darker
u hold her closer as she flickers
pause to take a picture ( flash) its 
good u finaly c her worth
bt no candle lasts foreva
as u get to that finish line
she gives her final ray of light
u thank her with a kiss so lite, and 
finaly
embrace the night, u r home and 
so is she..
(Final canndle dies)
THE END

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