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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 3:38:00 AM
    haiku that evokes happy feelings indeed...sent you soupmail!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 11:07:00 AM
    Hey Dee..did you get your package? RE: haiku with moss, I wouldn't use [spongey] in regard to the moss because it would be telling the reader my perspection of the moss ie: it's judgemental..also I wouldn't use it because i would only know that if I touched the moss which I didn't so it's would be something I judged to be the case in [my mind]..above since you are going for a modern would be fine to say [my child]

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    Date: 12/11/2012 11:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    & in line 3 I am assuming [ lol I just remembered the arse joke regarding assuming!] you are trying to make a metaphorical connection between the wheels of the stroller and the wheels in your mind? L & L
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:30:00 AM
    Great haiku ..Do get some more..Charma

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 11:12:00 PM
    Where are you? You should have a good excuse ready to explain your absence as soon as you're back! : D

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 11:27:00 AM
    LOL you could do [thinking, thinking, thinking] for line 3? Hey YOU what agreat surprise you made me day I was having a blue one..great everything photo's letter, GOOD work on the writing Verity! Santa Debbie-Do put something in the mail for you too! & Mom! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:41:00 PM
    Cyndi, humm, some image you got going here... .. enjoyed reading your haiku, :-) Have yourself a nice night~ PD

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 9:04:00 AM
    yes, it IS a happy one. Keep doing these, sweetie, and happy day to you!

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 8:07:00 AM
    How lovely is this Miss Cyndi. The wheels turn much too fast. Happy Thanksgiving. love, Kathy