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SLOSHING AROUND

Where and how a mind that I have met,
A mind with rainy thoughts in winter set,
Brings spring time to my darkest night and more,
Smiling through its testaments of lore,

Sloshing through the puddles as I seek,
A glimpse into her heart I want to sneak,
Delicate like petals on the ground,
A precious gentle soul that I have found,

Where in all this music can I feel,
Vibrations of a kind that seems so real,
Like ripples in the puddles underfoot,
Or sounds like songs I hear along my route,

Amazing oh, is she so far away,
Where and how, I’d like to greet one day.

©david byrne nov 2012 

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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 6:15:00 PM

    david, long long time no see!! It is great to see this latest post of yours. Wishing you a very merry christmas.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:13:00 PM

    absolutley amazing and beautiful poem david. this makes a readers heart melt. this deserves a round of applause.

    Byrne Avatar David Byrne Date: 11/23/2012 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Nicole; one has to be careful with the old love poems not to lapse into clichés so when you say it melts your heart then I feel I did a good nights work: ) Thank you : )