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Painful Enchantment

Trembling thoughts.
Can I save you?
I found the passageway.
Raindrops quiver,
As they drop upon the leaves.
We enter perfect daylight.
You ask,"Can we dance"?
Suddenly it's night.
Our bodies fit together in a fit of tumbling passion.
Magic.
A blanket of stars overhead.
Back and forth, back and forth,
We sidle to silent music.
The trance continues.
Rhythmic beats,
At our feet.
I could stay here forever.
I can't hide it anymore.
"I love you", I whimper.
Finally.
He says,"You saved me."

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  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:26:00 PM

    Emma, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD

    Grindele Avatar Emma Grindele Date: 11/28/2012 8:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you ever so much!(:
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 11:39:00 PM

    You have revealed a real talent with your poetry in this poem. I hope that you will continue to favor us with so many more of your penned creations.

    Grindele Avatar Emma Grindele Date: 11/26/2012 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much.(:
  1. Date: 11/24/2012 3:00:00 PM

    Stunning write, you have skills!

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:07:00 PM

    First off, amazing title! It alone draws me in! This is marvelous, I love It. Especially the last line :) love saves all! Well penned my dear poet friend!

    Grindele Avatar Emma Grindele Date: 11/21/2012 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    D'aww you're a doll! Thank you so much. Love most certainly does save all.(: