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ABOMINATION

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ABOMINATION


A bloom of abomination grows in the bed

of yearning that we planted long, long ago,

our relationship, once tender buds, lays dead

and my inner soul I now struggle to sow.

Sweet affection has been replaced by tart scorn,

the passion I cherish has released its last flame,

taste dried tears kept in the heart that you’ve torn 

hear my weak attempt to give this loss a name.

While you bamboozle, bury a guileless truth,

I will simply mute each contemptible lie,

the deceit of an old fool reclaiming youth

loots from a rich past and a future decries.

You spread your seed in the dirt you penetrate,

then lift my clean sheets, too late, much too late. 





*A modern sonnet


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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:58:00 PM
    Powerful write Cyndi! Congrats on your awesome win! Hugs

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:25:00 AM
    Congratulations.....Seren

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place Cyndi love xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 12:19:00 AM
    Well penned sonnet Cyndi! The deceit of loved ones is hard to take - I like how you've weaved the theme. Well done!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:31:00 PM
    A well deserved win poem, congratulations. -A poem to be proud of, very well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:33:00 PM
    Cyndi... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:33:00 AM
    A pearl of poetry coming out of pain. Marvelous work!

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:52:00 AM
    I'd say you are a modern Shakespeare and he would be proud to stand beside you. A strong message Cydi, rouses emotion in the reader which you do so well. Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 6:27:00 PM
    A very bold write indeed Cyndi, thanks for posting this one, its really good, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:32:00 PM
    I have seen the deceipt of old fools trying to regain thier youth. Younger wives faster cars, attempts to reshape old bodies, clothing of much younger men. What is the obsession our society has with youth??? I like your poem very much, well done.

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:06:00 PM
    Cyndi, love the sonnet.. deep and provokes a war in my thoughts... it is never to late, enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 3:45:00 PM
    Strong, vigilant a great write and sonnet, loved the metaphors. Hope you didn't eat as much as me [ohhhhhh tummy] Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 3:09:00 PM
    Soup Mail!! : )