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Hurt

painful bug
all day all around
unbeaten 

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 

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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:45:00 PM

    Ellie, i hate bugs,,, hope it was not a bite,,, .. enjoyed reading your haiku, :-) Have yourself a nice night~ PD

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/24/2012 12:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hate bugs too - any 'bugs' :-) TY! Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:30:00 PM

    An impressive Haiku -beautifully worded. Thanks for your felicitations on my Haiku Buried Heart winning in the contest. Happy Thanks Giving. -Mohammad

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/24/2012 12:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY Mohammed for taking the time to read and comment with content!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 1:45:00 PM

    that's a very nice expressed Haiku, thanks for sharing it. God bless you.' Hugs!Erich

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 11/23/2012 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY so much for taking the time to read and comment with content. TY :+) Ellie Daphne