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illogical prayer

That day, the sky delineates the beauty of a golden dusk,
The dusk which shed the azure of a day,
The dusk which seduce the earth to picked up her shadow upon the moonlit,

To the dear night she sang,
Chanted about the grief of a daylight,
Wrapped neat the anxiousness within the side of a jaded soul,
Shush the wishsong when the world began to burke,

That day, in the hubbub sense tucked a prayer,
A prayer with all improbabilities of a reality,
A prayer with all of the naivete,
Is the prayer in her desire to have a pair of impossibilities,

A pair of wings,

A human being who literally could not set down the sky with her bare feet,
A gifted creature with the remarkably things around her yet full of limitations,
A naive prayer but able to bring tiny grin on that day,
That day, that single beauty returned to her essence as a needy creature who craved for the existence of the almighty

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  1. Date: 11/28/2012 4:13:00 PM

    I hope this craving is satisfied, yes he does exist and prayer is the logical means to connect with him. This is truly trancendant piece of work. I very much enjoyed the feelings and innocence that you framed with your words. You truly do have a poetic heart.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 6:07:00 PM

    ‡ She Sounds Quite Beautiful, With Perhaps A Childlike Faith, Sweet Beautiful Yanny. Although It Seems As Though Another Whom May Lack Such A Faith ? And In My Own Heart's Deepest Belief, Without 'Faith,' It Impossible To Please, 'The Most High God!' Also, In Regards Unto Being Childlike ? These Are Those Whom Shall One Day Gaze Upon, 'His Beautiful Glory.' Very Nice Painting; Stirring One's Heart. Thank You, For Your Beauty's Lovely Visit; Wonderful! 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 6:34:00 AM

    Interesting lines penned..Sara

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/21/2012 6:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara :), and glad that you visit :) - hug, yanny