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Time Can't Stop The Thrill

Time, 
Rushed,
Please stop,
Demanding,
The pleasure of fun
Seconds should be more than 60

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Hands,
up,
Hands down,
Let's get dance,
Thrilled on the dance floor
Melt on urge,  last on steps, show time!

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:01:00 AM

    I am not familiar with this style, but really enjoyed your poem. It brought me two very different emotions.