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alone

like the last leaf
before winter's chill
i hang on this branch
tired and alone
waiting for a gust of wind
that never comes
to set me free
 
i cling on
lifeless
blank of all color
thirsting for something more
than this frigid air
to hold me tight
 
yet night arrives
showing off
the fullness of moon
but my shadow
remains empty
like footsteps
in yesterday's snow

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:28:00 PM

    Very beautiful!

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 2:40:00 PM

    As always you paint emotions so beautifuly. Even when you make them blank of color. Stunning piece, I am definately a fan. You continue to amaze me.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/24/2012 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    wow...thank you for your sweet reply!
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:08:00 PM

    Sandra,you speak directly to me in this poem.A sad tale indeed,and the darkness that surrounds me these days drags me down.I need light! Hugs~Arild

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/24/2012 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for the reply Arild...sorry you are sad but i do hope you find the light! Shine though your wonderful poetry! Hugs!
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 4:36:00 PM

    Its usually when im lonely im at my most creative, and obviously by this piece so are you Sandra, very nice , blessings, Carl

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/24/2012 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Carl :)
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:18:00 AM

    You tell a sad tale here very movingly! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/24/2012 5:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Matthew :) Hugs Sandy
    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/24/2012 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anish!
  1. Date: 11/20/2012 8:37:00 PM

    Sorry to read that you feel so alone.Well hey,as long as your here,you won't be alone.People here can fill you with new life.And all you need to do is accept it. <3 (o:

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2012 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Dan for being so kind..
  1. Date: 11/20/2012 8:24:00 PM

    Umm despressing. What exactly do you want the reader to feel? I want to know how you feel about all this and why are you alone?

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/20/2012 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    this time of year is depressing for me, my mother, father, brother have all gone from life...the images convey death, the trees, the empty shadow, the footsteps being hidden by the snow...i am alone in the sense of my family as i knew it...