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East-to-West

Your heart rises to the east,and 
sets with mine to the 
west,where our earthly love 
Rotationally revolves around 
the sun, truthfully,burning an 
inferno flame.

Together we will, break dawn, 
and reach for the stars, 
gravidly speaking to hinder, 
those who will listen,under 
moonlights nightly story.

I tell you I love you, You reply 
ditto, all in the same,because 
we are that one great puzzle to 
life, that people adore; or envy.

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:31:00 PM

    Hello CarmaStopping by with a special greeting, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/21/2012 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi PD I don't mind at all, I appreciate your deep thought feelings always, they give me a sense of warmness in my bones, and thank you for all the sincere support you have given me as well, happy holidays to you and your family... Always and forever, Sp FAM till the end xoxo Carma
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 6:10:00 AM

    I love it, Carma. Sounds like your love for each other is great. That is a blessing. Cherish one another. Love ya, Toquyen

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/21/2012 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for loving it! I will always cherish this man, not saying any name, but I will always love him always and forever, for it is a blessing that will be treasured in my heart forever your comments are as well love ya too Carma
  1. Date: 11/20/2012 7:36:00 PM

    Ditto? Really? You get that reply? I once heard. "Must not mean it,if they can't really say it?" Ha,ha... I love the the write. :o)

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/21/2012 5:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Dan, glad you loved it anyways love big Carma