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About This Poem

On Bended Knee

Joy
Tears fall
smile appears 
What a surprise
Yes!



Attempting a new style.

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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/11/2012 11:34:00 PM
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    Reading this one again...cheering you on.... I read the soup mail :-)... Im... talking to my sister right... I will be back tomorrow afternoon... thank you always... and for the win... I'm glad I took the time to fix the syllable...Linda
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    Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 11/23/2012 2:56:00 PM
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    Lanterne! Wow! You're truly bringing light with this cute little piece, Rick! Great idea! Blessings, Hanitra

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/23/2012 3:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Why thank you Hanitra. Any more questionku's ?? Do you have a thanksgiving day celebration this time of year?
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 11/21/2012 9:38:00 PM
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    Richard,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 11/21/2012 9:07:00 AM
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    ‡ I Do Not Know About Erotic, Dear Sweet Richard, But This Short Poe Sure Seems Stimulating Unto One's Dreamful Senses. One Can Somewhat Find The Joy Amid This Beauty, 'Upon Bended Knee,' A Kiss Upon Her Rose! Very Fragrant And Thank You Sweet Friend, For Your Kind Lovely Visit Wherein You Made Me Smile With Your Amuseful Com. 'Soft Smooth Sweet Silk,' Tis My Joy. 'Happy Holiday.' Love Always, Rachel *
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    harry horsman
    Date: 11/21/2012 8:29:00 AM
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    you must have read one of Jack Ellison's poems i did..then i read this beauty...
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    Anne Currin
    Date: 11/20/2012 5:49:00 PM
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    With little words, this made me feel a lot :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/20/2012 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne
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    Jack Ellison
    Date: 11/20/2012 4:35:00 PM
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    Bright, upbeat, cheery... what more can I say! This style is a new one on me, but then most styles other than a quatrain are unfamiliar to me! LOL

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/20/2012 6:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I was on my way to learn about limericks and came accross this little pretty.