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The Master's House Part I

Through city streets past vacant mills, across a river no longer pristine, between paint chipped multi-family homes, where a hundred years ago small children ran squealing to Auntie’s on covered front porches; my car traveled tentatively, encasing, enclosing, protecting, me from the unfamiliar, rundown, decaying, ambience of the area. Halting at graffitied stop signs, pausing, nominally, at red lights, I searched for the Shamans home.

The house sat soot colored, gray, shutters hanging precariously, perched fallen 
lashes, from rotten sashes. Coated with the grime of years. A stair railing waggled, 
held by bracers of five-inch nails. I tread up them, carefully, watching where I placed 
the weight, of my slight form.

The door stood, agape, and I entered,full of brass, like Gretel into the wood, trusting
like Dionysus in what my light would find. I walked upward grimacing. Wreaths of Christmas past, hung dust-glazed upon dreary doors, whose foot worn mats had long
since lost the battle against the mill town’s grime. Her door, my Witch's, was on the 
third floor. Three the number of creation, the trinity of the soul. Adorned with an 
elephant knocker of dull brass,a red, hollow, plastic, heart hung from its trunk, a truly unorthodox doorknocker. Tapping, tapping, with the hollow heart, upon the 
hallowed door, my heart echoed its beat and rose in my throat.

The door sprang inward, opening, upon to a Buddha-like smile. Her arms wrapped
warmly around me, Welcoming. A bay of east facing windows, Backlit her in an
angelic glow. I faced forward. My vision encompassing three rooms. We stood 
amidst the eye of the storm.



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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:20:00 AM

    Maybe I'm blind, but i don't see anything here that is connected to a storm. I see dust covered aging, abandonment, and run down areas. I am curious to see what the witch has to say to you... I shall rush along to part three. What happened to part two? love and hugs, catie :)

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/21/2012 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    the storm in and of her mind was seen in passing ..by observing the mess it left behind..but for this momnet there was stillness as if the eye of the hurricane had re-settled here
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:14:00 AM

    soupmail :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 1:53:00 AM

    I love the last line "We stood amidst the eye of the storm." And you described the storm i.e. the aftermath thereof with such vivid imagery.

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 8:28:00 PM

    I can't stop laughing!! My family's fine! : ) I'll revise it, I promise...