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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:20:00 AM
    Maybe I'm blind, but i don't see anything here that is connected to a storm. I see dust covered aging, abandonment, and run down areas. I am curious to see what the witch has to say to you... I shall rush along to part three. What happened to part two? love and hugs, catie :)

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/21/2012 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    the storm in and of her mind was seen in passing observing the mess it left behind..but for this momnet there was stillness as if the eye of the hurricane had re-settled here
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:14:00 AM
    soupmail :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 1:53:00 AM
    I love the last line "We stood amidst the eye of the storm." And you described the storm i.e. the aftermath thereof with such vivid imagery.

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 8:28:00 PM
    I can't stop laughing!! My family's fine! : ) I'll revise it, I promise...