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Four Flowered Fields

happy yellow daffodils nodding in the summer breeze are greeting each passerby with fragrant delight underneath an azure sky butterflies and hummingbirds complete the perfect picture of lavender fields rows of tulips form an arch arranged by color beneath a bright cloudless Holland sky. . . a rainbow of blooms in a crimson sky, sun sinks into an ocean of grass - wave upon wave of poppies splendidly surging Written 11/18/12 by Andrea Dietrich for Russell Sivey's "Natural Dodoitsu" Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:11:00 PM

    A nice winning poem~LUV*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 10:34:00 PM

    lovely

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:02:00 PM

    ANDREA, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 3:45:00 PM

    You painted a picture with words. Like it.

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:38:00 AM

    Beautiful picture Andrea, you make me want to go there and see it for real

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 12:21:00 AM

    Oh, fields of flowers..lovely. congrats. BG.. Hope all is well with you..dont get by here much but am going to try to do better. BG

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 9:48:00 AM

    My big congratulations with big hugs on your super win my dear Andrea! Good night. I'll come back tom. Take care and good luck always! love much, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:43:00 PM

    Well done Andrea ....Seren

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 9:24:00 PM

    Lovely picture of early spring here in pacific Northwest also. congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:30:00 PM

    Amazing imagery here in this Dodoitsu Andrea!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:41:00 PM

    Congratulations on your fantastic win, Andrea! Beautiful images! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:16:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Andy love xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 7:49:00 PM

    beautiful poem Andrea....congrats on your win....hugs

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 6:37:00 PM

    Simply Lovely, I see a win in your future,( providing the World doesn't end before the contest ha ha.)

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 10:56:00 AM

    Such beauty of imagery here Andrea in your dodoitsu, loved reading it. sur to do well in the contest dear.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Andrea you are so good at creating the most vivid, gorgeous images in your poems. I absolutely love this, you are honestly such a talented poet!

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:52:00 AM

    Love flowers and love your poem Andrea. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 3:32:00 AM

    Wow Andrea, this is just beautiful, Loved the visuals. I wrote a poem very simillar. well done. warm best wishes. Pete.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Oh you make me long for spring naughty woman LOL Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 9:43:00 AM

    Oh, I love flowers, Andrea!! I had never planted tulips, but my neighbour's always reach up to embrace Spring. I can smell the lavender! A write to feed the senses! Splendid imagery.:) There'd been a field beside my parent's home with catnip growing there..(hint hint:) Hope you'll have a great weekend! Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 10:46:00 AM

    Oh, wow, this is really great. The imagery is amazing - I especially love the last stanza. I can picture it so well in my mind! This will definitely rank at the top in Russell's contest!

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 12:29:00 AM

    Now you've sent me to dreamland with this beauty dear.. I'm wishing i was there surrounded by all those tulips.. :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:19:00 AM

    Beautiful words! Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:31:00 AM

    Excellent poem my dear friend Andrea! I love it so much and the form. How I wish I can write a dodoitsu someday.A winner for sure! Thank you for sharing and good luck always! love, LG

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 6:11:00 PM

    Well done! Thanks for painting these four lovely pictures. Very best wishes for a win in Russell Sivey's, "Natural Dodoitsu" Poetry Contest, Andrea. Happy Thanksgiving! Annalise

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 2:01:00 PM

    wow, I just love these, Andrea - a sure winner in Russell's contest

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 1:06:00 PM

    Pretty little pastel words to brighten up my day. I thank you for them very much, that's all I have to say. :)

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 11:10:00 AM

    wonderful write Andrea....winning wishes...love...Joseph

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:56:00 AM

    A regular carnival of color. Enjoyed mucho. Finally caught up. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:50:00 AM

    Can see this beautiful scenery Andrea!!Wonderful imagery!

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