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The night

The nights are getting cold
The stars are shining bright
Looking down, then up to 
heaven
Wondering where I go from this 
night? 

The darkness is all around me
But I search for the light
The world keeps spinning 
around now
Feeling so dizzy, wanting to be 
held tight.

I dream an unknown face
Will I ever see that sight
Always feeling so alone
Wondering if it will ever be all 
right.

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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:19:00 AM

    A very well written poem, but it's a bit sad Andrea. - I wish you a pleasant and relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:31:00 PM

    ANDREA,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 2:43:00 PM

    ‡ Gazing Upon Your Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Andrea, My Heart Cannot Fathom How That Such A Beautiful Daughter, Could Ever Never Not Be Loved. Ten Thousand Reaching Arms In Love's Longing, To Hold Your Beauty Close, Feeling The Love Of Your Light! Sooo Don't Ever Forget That, And Keep Brushing Your Deepest Beauty. My Love, Always, Rachel * 'Happy Holidays' *