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Silence now

The little noises she makes
Softly while she sleeps
I die in the silence now.

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  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:36:00 PM

    ‡ Skipping A Short Trek Through Your Beauty's Visits Below, Sweet Beautiful Andrea, I Too In Part Find But Perhaps A Lost Child Amid These Soulful Words, Although, It Seems As Though A Precious Child From Thousands Of Years Gone By Now ? Either Or, I Wished To Stop And Say Hello Unto Your Lovely Beauty! I Hope You Had A Wonderful Thanksging, And That Things Are Well For You. Look Forward Unto A New Painting By Your Beauty, So Don't Quit Brushing. 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 2:49:00 PM

    Very sad! Very powerful!

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 8:54:00 PM

    oh wow...this is powerful...it can be taken many ways, but to me, speaks of a child lost! I hope it is just a poetic imagination but either way, very well written...the image sticks with the reader!