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Market Place

When I am a afraid 
I close my eyes 
I hear a sweet symphony 
A thousand music tunes 
All at once coming through
Young girl in the market 
Yes, that's me , all alone 
 Eyes all full of mystery 
As I sing away the loneliness 
They say the most awful things 
But I hear violins when I close my eyes 
As I fly off to the center of my sun 
So I cannot be hurt by anything 
This wicked world as done 
Young boy in the market place 
He's taken by the men 
As he wakes, can't remember anything 
 They break the most beautiful  things 
But I hear violins when I shut my eyes 
And fly off to the center of the sun 
So I cannot be hurt by anything 
This wicked world has done 
As I look into your eyes 
I'm at the center of my sun 
The boy in the market place 
Sees the girl all alone 
Have you lost your way home?
I look up, I hear his voice singing.
I hear sweet symphonies in his words.
As I look into his eyes 
I'm at the center of my sun
And I cannot be hurt by anything 
Of what this wicked world has done!

11   12    2012      10pm   Monday

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  1. Date: 1/14/2013 3:25:00 PM

    you suffered the market place and almost remember ...but you escape in the music for one...

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 1:45:00 PM

    VERY nicely put together, Debbie...I like the way you used the repeating lines so effectively...I enjoyed the read! - Tim

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:54:00 PM

    clever write, my friend

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 6:06:00 PM

    Debbie, this write is sensational. I love it. Very nicely done :)

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:02:00 PM

    Hello Debbie, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:17:00 AM

    Merry Christmas Debbie! With open eyes, I hope you see. The goodness that can truly be. And when the darkness shadows life. May God's sweet angels stave the strife.

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:49:00 AM

    Inspirational and comforting! Very good write!

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 4:27:00 AM

    This is an extremely beautiful poem my dear friend, Debbie! You've vividly painted here the real image of the place! thank you so much for sharing and your precious time reading my poem "Seagull's plight". Have a very merry Christmas to you also and your love ones. love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 4:10:00 AM

    though here we are mongst millions, sometimes the thoughts of one, separate us from the villians, the protective glow the sun....

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:47:00 PM

    This is a beautiful write. I can almost picture the market place. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 9:47:00 PM

    beautiful poem. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:55:00 PM

    wow, this is really an interesting one. What country are you in? It appears that you are describing some market scenes not like in the US.

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 5:36:00 PM

    may santa bring you all you need, ole sleigh is getting tuned 4 speed, reindeer bright the flighty breed, at your door they'll come, to bring sweet Debbie some, yes indeed...

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 4:15:00 AM

    I like this one..It brings up all kinds of scenes for me like an abused child, a person caught up in the sex trafficing market since childhood, etc..Great work that you have created..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:44:00 AM

    Inner piece, a treasured commodity we all seek at times, wonderful write.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 3:17:00 AM

    Splendid verse...awesome share Debbie,,,thank you so much...am delighted with your nice sharing...wishing you have a fabulous blessing days... luv and hugs far off <3 <3 <3 Sk

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 10:31:00 PM

    shut the eyes an drift away, better on a rainy day, delight!

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 8:16:00 AM

    so profound this wonderful poem...

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 4:16:00 AM

    One of your best loved the repeating verse, I cannot be hurt by anything this wicked world has done.

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick Date: 12/16/2012 4:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Great to be able to go to such a place..Sometimes when that happens it causes a person to develope multiple personalities..Sara
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 4:27:00 AM

    Soon it will be christmas and then valentines day. Hopefully, there will be many acts of kindness. We shall see. Your comments to me have meant a lot. They are very kind. Finding the way home can be a real challenge.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:36:00 AM

    This is really wonderful piece, I love the picture which you try to describe through your wonderful verses, thank you for checking out my page before, it's been a pleasure :)

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 9:25:00 PM

    What a wonderful hopeful tale you have told here. I enjoyed this poem very much. You are a great story teller.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:55:00 PM

    Thank-you for your recent comment. No matter what happens, I like how you end this work--cannot be hurt by anything--you know that you are good!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:15:00 PM

    This is beautifully written Debbie, sad experience.... ...... I must admit that I love to go to the market .... all the smells and exciting things. - I wish you a peaceful Sunday afternoon / evening. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 7:25:00 AM

    Beautiful poetry from your pen... sad but so engaging to read.... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 2:45:00 PM

    So powerful and you do get your point across, the write would benifit from a few line breaks for emphasis..break after [ This wicked world as done/line 14] This is an important refrain. So, after the next idenical line too. XXXOOO Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 4:58:00 PM

    Hi Debbie, this is an amazing piece,a great tale spun in the backdrop of societies less fortunate but with inspired hope. I love it. Blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:14:00 AM

    Debbie-you are absolutely right about Freud. His model is not accurate. I don't think there is a really good model for a human--at least not yet! This poem has a dreamy quality. Being able to fly is a wonderful thing and it's enjoyable that you let us experience it. Thanks for that gift.

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:20:00 AM

    Thanks for reading and reviewing my poetry. I enjoyed reading this and no one can touch the center of you unless you allow them too. Take care. Janet

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 3:32:00 AM

    Loved it! Glad you have a place of refuge! I sent you some soup mail

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