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Market Place

When I am a afraid 
I close my eyes 
I hear a sweet symphony 
A thousand music tunes 
All at once coming through
Young girl in the market 
Yes, that's me , all alone 
 Eyes all full of mystery 
As I sing away the loneliness 
They say the most awful things 
But I hear violins when I close my eyes 
As I fly off to the center of my sun 
So I cannot be hurt by anything 
This wicked world as done 
Young boy in the market place 
He's taken by the men 
As he wakes, can't remember anything 
 They break the most beautiful  things 
But I hear violins when I shut my eyes 
And fly off to the center of the sun 
So I cannot be hurt by anything 
This wicked world has done 
As I look into your eyes 
I'm at the center of my sun 
The boy in the market place 
Sees the girl all alone 
Have you lost your way home?
I look up, I hear his voice singing.
I hear sweet symphonies in his words.
As I look into his eyes 
I'm at the center of my sun
And I cannot be hurt by anything 
Of what this wicked world has done!

11   12    2012      10pm   Monday

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  1. Date: 4/21/2014 5:56:00 AM
    Enjoyed this Debbie. I've got one in foetus mode about hurting, This may kickstart me into finishing it soon. God Bless. D.

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 3:25:00 PM
    you suffered the market place and almost remember ...but you escape in the music for one...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/14/2013 8:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Don ;}
  1. Date: 1/14/2013 1:45:00 PM
    VERY nicely put together, Debbie...I like the way you used the repeating lines so effectively...I enjoyed the read! - Tim

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/14/2013 8:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Tim ;}
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:54:00 PM
    clever write, my friend

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/2/2013 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jack ;}
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 6:06:00 PM
    Debbie, this write is sensational. I love it. Very nicely done :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 1/2/2013 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne ;}
  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:02:00 PM
    Hello Debbie, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:17:00 AM
    Merry Christmas Debbie! With open eyes, I hope you see. The goodness that can truly be. And when the darkness shadows life. May God's sweet angels stave the strife.

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:49:00 AM
    Inspirational and comforting! Very good write!

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 4:27:00 AM
    This is an extremely beautiful poem my dear friend, Debbie! You've vividly painted here the real image of the place! thank you so much for sharing and your precious time reading my poem "Seagull's plight". Have a very merry Christmas to you also and your love ones. love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 4:10:00 AM
    though here we are mongst millions, sometimes the thoughts of one, separate us from the villians, the protective glow the sun....

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/20/2012 11:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Don ,,, thank you for reading ;}
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:47:00 PM
    This is a beautiful write. I can almost picture the market place. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 9:47:00 PM
    beautiful poem. Warm thoughts, Ralph

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/18/2012 11:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:55:00 PM
    wow, this is really an interesting one. What country are you in? It appears that you are describing some market scenes not like in the US.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/18/2012 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading Andrea ;}
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 5:36:00 PM
    may santa bring you all you need, ole sleigh is getting tuned 4 speed, reindeer bright the flighty breed, at your door they'll come, to bring sweet Debbie some, yes indeed...

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 4:15:00 AM
    I like this one..It brings up all kinds of scenes for me like an abused child, a person caught up in the sex trafficing market since childhood, etc..Great work that you have created..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/16/2012 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You, Sara ;} are so right,,,, I was thinking of child-abuse/ sex trafficking,,, as I was watching anime on u- tube. Thank you for reading my words,,,,, have an awesome blessed day ;}
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:44:00 AM
    Inner piece, a treasured commodity we all seek at times, wonderful write.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 3:17:00 AM
    Splendid verse...awesome share Debbie,,,thank you so much...am delighted with your nice sharing...wishing you have a fabulous blessing days... luv and hugs far off <3 <3 <3 Sk

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 10:31:00 PM
    shut the eyes an drift away, better on a rainy day, delight!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/3/2012 12:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Don ,, thank you for reading,,,
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 8:16:00 AM
    so profound this wonderful poem...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/1/2012 10:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you harry ;} was watching Animie,,, Japanese cartoons and computer , as I wrote ;}
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 4:16:00 AM
    One of your best loved the repeating verse, I cannot be hurt by anything this wicked world has done.

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick
    Date: 12/16/2012 4:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Great to be able to go to such a place..Sometimes when that happens it causes a person to develope multiple personalities..Sara
    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/1/2012 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anthony ;}
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