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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:34:00 PM
    Awesome reading Debbie, I love it.

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Nope. Ignore that last stutter idea. The flutter is so much more perfect in that last line. I'm going to try for a short soup mail, since she's actually SINGING right now.

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 12:13:00 PM
    Okay, this is RICH and easy to identify with, for so many. Now, cause I read a "please let me know typos in comments is okay" Okay. :) Check all your repeated Mother's heart flutters (which is great - love the repetion) you're missing a "T" and, in another, an "S" and in another an "apostrophe S"... you know, what may also work? The word stutters instead of flutters. This poem touched me in a lot of way, Bet. (Girl is still happily talking to her toys... playing... BLISS... )xox Dee

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:40:00 AM
    Beautiful write on the anxiety and happiness which can be seen on a mother's face on the arrival of her son. You have given a wonderful touch with the arrival of a flight and thank you for your comments on my Poem. Love and best wishes..Ravindra

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 12:43:00 PM
    Flight 231 has delivered your son. The race you have run feels like you have won. As children and birdies fade into the sun. The longing is over with heart filled content. A mother and child's love is so heaven sent.-