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Evolution Morn

one taut line drawn---
       
           old blood versus new blood---

                            evolution morn
~*~

Inspired by "Breaking Dawn"

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:50:00 AM

    In my minds eye I envision a young and old stallion pitted against each other. Who will win? the young and strong or the older more experienced? Today perhaps the older but eventually youth will prevail.

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 9:01:00 AM

    This title Breaking Dawn sounds so familiar to me. One really nice poem it inspired from you. Happy thanksgiving, sweet lady!!

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:24:00 PM

    Annalise,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 1:50:00 AM

    reminds me of Jean Auel's THE LAND OF PAINTED CAVES well done..

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 3:10:00 PM

    Deep poem Annalise, well written. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 1:34:00 PM

    ....................... INTENSE, SWEET BEAUTIFUL ANNALISE. THE TERM, 'VERSUS,' TIS WHAT MAKES IT FEEL SO MUCH MORE DEEPLY WITHIN, PROFOUND I MAY SAY ? I'M KIND OF DIGGING IT ALTHOUGH IT SEEMS SOOO, 'EROTIC.' I AM GOING TO FAVOUR THIS TREASURE BECAUSE THERE SEEMS SOMETHING, JUST AMAZINGLY 'BEAUTIFUL' ABOUT ITS, 'MESMERIZING SPLENDOURS.' YOU HAVE A VERY BEAUTIFUL DAY, BEAUTIFUL ANNALISE AND, 'HAPPY HOLIDAYS.' MY LOVE, ALWAYS, RACHEL *