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Secret Garden

How cool  ~
The secret garden. 
I have a key. 
Do you wanna go ?

I wonder   ~
What should we wear? 
How should we dress ?
When should we go ?

I'd really like to stay.
That is, if it's ok ?
I would plant flowers everywhere.
With little gnomes here and there.

And make it welcome 
Just for my fairy friends ~
That would come by to say hi.
And maybe plant a fish pond.    

For the little Koi to  come play.
From the babbling brook near by.
Fragrant flowers for the bees passing by.
But most of all .

Within this place I'd fined
Tranquility with peaceful grace 
So every morning before  I start.
I'd visit that secret garden within my heart.   



11  18   2012  Sun. 2pm

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  1. Date: 6/3/2013 6:00:00 AM

    That was really beautiful, I can see it as a garden scene but then take it deeper Then you have that inner whisper, that every one is unknowingly looking for. Anyhow, I really got something out of it. thank you for this.

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 4:13:00 PM

    I love your secret garden poem- so full of joy and whimsy, Thanks for your welcome to me. luv, Suz

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:32:00 PM

    so lovely,,,,, thank you dear Debbie for sharing you charming write <3 <3 <3 wishing you have a blessed day :) hugs n luv :) Sk

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 12:43:00 PM

    Very sweet and imaginative write my friend. Descriptive imagery brings your secret garden to life for the reader. Always, Curt

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:33:00 PM

    How cool! A secret garden? This was great.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:34:00 AM

    this sounds like an oasis of tranquillity, very pretty poem...thanks for stopping by and a happy new year to you too! :)

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:31:00 PM

    Very nice Debbie... your secret is no longer secret... I'll bet somebody has found (or soon will find) entrance to the secret places in your heart! Terry

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 11:38:00 AM

    lovely write, my friend

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 11:05:00 AM

    I want to be in this place! This is wonderful!

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 7:28:00 PM

    just like that special garden in the novel of the same name as this poem. WEre you inspired by that story? Lovely.

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 5:05:00 PM

    A lovely garden you have shared with us. Enjoy your light style - joyous. Thank you.

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 2:25:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this one today..It is good to know that you have a secret garden in your heart..I know that it must be a very beautiful garden with lovely Tube Roses and Long Stemmed Roses..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:57:00 AM

    i have one of those in my mind Debbie, well at least somewhere to hide...this is a wonderful poem, so reminiscent today of escapism, and why not, it makes for awesome poetry like this is... just love this....

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 12:52:00 PM

    We all need a secret place where we can retreat and find tranquility. Your question on traitor, I can only say it was a teacher but not who you mentioned.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 12:43:00 AM

    "and deep within my mind" love the idea for sweet tranquilty....

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:48:00 PM

    Sounds wonderful, thanks for sharing your secret garden with us.

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:08:00 PM

    Oh so sweet my dear Debbie! Going to bed now to dream... hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:19:00 AM

    Love your peaceful garden,Debbie.Beautiful and soothing poem:) Love~Arild

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 9:34:00 PM

    Reminds me of the beautiful Botanic Gardens in Brooklyn where they have a pond and lake full of fish. Peaceful and enjoyable work here. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 3:38:00 PM

    I love to come to your garden...we should wear white lace dresses and have flowers in our hair, so butterflies can pitch on our heads. Beautiful write! Happy Thanks Giving to you and yours! Hugs

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 11:35:00 PM

    Beautiful! I enjoyed it

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 9:14:00 AM

    Wow! Debbie This is some poem. I love it and I would love to visit, if you invite me. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 5:08:00 AM

    Debbie, yes I will visit your secret garden - lovely. - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)