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Haiku-Night hunt

still waters a lost girl watches the wolf's reflection

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  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:35:00 PM

    Beautifully phrased in a sweet macabre mode. The Haiku is my favourite though I admit I haven't written a lot of them.

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 7:09:00 PM

    Thanks so much for your awsome comment! After reading it, I just had to check out your haikus. This one is perfect. I can't recall reading a better! Wishing you inspiration.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 12:06:00 PM

    The scene is painted with a few words..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 12:24:00 AM

    A good different one here. The reflection should be a nice one. I have a thing for wolves which makes me like the animal a lot. -- Sean

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 4:48:00 PM

    oooh, that is a chilling one, Charma. ME likes.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:50:00 PM

    wow Little Red Riding Hood, love this!!

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 12:55:00 PM

    Why should the wolf be a bad wolf, if imagination like yours can paint him snow white, and the girl is lost in ecstatic bliss... For me, not scary at all; I want to dream a beautiful dream tonight! Thanks for inspiring, Charming Charmaine! Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:50:00 PM

    Hello, Charmaine, so much to watch out for... I enjoyed the whole reflecting scenario ,, hope she moves fast.. enjoyed reading your haiku, :-) Have yourself a nice night~ PD

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 10:56:00 AM

    This haiku makes me wonder, I can just imagine so much into this piece of yours... I hope all is well with you dear friend! Thank you for passing by my poem :) sending you and Christina hugs....

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Yeah Chilling one Charma.....thanks for visiting my poem.

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 9:33:00 AM

    Chilling haiku, Charmaine!...Great imagination - Tim

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 7:09:00 AM

    ‡ The Question Would Seem To Be, Sweet Beautiful Precious Charmaine, Are They A Hungry Wolf Or Be They Loving Wolf ? A Lassie Prototype, Come To Save The Lost Damsel Perhaps In Distress ? Her Beauty Standing Aside The Glittering Stream Gazing At The Shimmering Stars As, Loving Eyes Gaze To Blink Near And Afar Amid The Whispering Woods And, 'They Lived Happily Ever EverAfter.' Smile, Sooo Beautiful Your Reflection These, Enchanting Waters Where Your Beauty Sparkles Then Glows. Happy Holidays. My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 5:14:00 AM

    Good one - like your haiku Charmaine. - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 12:20:00 AM

    Wolf? Nah! It is me!! : ) Scary haiku (or Senryu?) ...How's baby Christina?