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Stinking thinking

A barren man
 in a barren land,
Not welcomed by my own kind,
Peeking through curtains stained 
by my own pain,
My soul beckons for the end of time.
In this hollow shell
 dwells my own hell,
Tormenting me day and night
So ive chosen to embrace
 being alone in this race,
Rather than expose my deepest fright
So is it so odd 
I still cry to God
To please come set me free
From thoughts unkind
 in my shattered mind,
Please God rescue me from me.





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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:10:00 PM

    awesome words you got there Carl,,, I have written the line "set me free " in a few of my poems. and thank you for reading my "Market Place.

    Fraser Avatar Carl Fraser Date: 11/23/2012 6:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading and commenting Debbie, it is much appreciated