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yellow light

yellow light flickers

    from candles grouped together

            ... the storm rages on

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 7:10:00 AM

    you have painted a very emotive and expressive scene..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stoppin by my blog..Sara

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:43:00 PM

    Clicked on this one to see if I'd commented to it yet. And I saw my comment to you on the older actress from FActs of Life. I was really happy she won the audience favorite. What a lovely person she showed herself to be on Survivor. Are you happy Denise won? I was a bit surprised, but pleasantly so.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:28:00 PM

    VERY Nice one here. yep, Boston Rob was something else. So who do you want to win THIS survivor? I am kind of partial to the older actress. Does nobody know who she is yet?

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 7:27:00 AM

    Francine, a beautiful crafted haiku, so visual, Constance

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 10:09:00 AM

    Like this one Francine, I am just starting my journey(maybe) into haiku.xx

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:09:00 PM

    Hi Francine, love your little write :)

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 8:47:00 AM

    Francine...wow...love the flickering image.... almost like lightning...luv...pd

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 7:45:00 AM

    Hi Francine - this is a great original picture. Cannot be said of the aftermath. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 2:27:00 PM

    an evocative haiku!! I particualry like how the storms rage is felt through the use of the word FLICKER! Happy Thanks Giving Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:42:00 AM

    great write thanks for this Haiku form getting the hang of it,nice write Francine

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 1:20:00 AM

    Gorgeous image in this haiku Francine.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 3:04:00 PM

    You can borrow mine: "Light In The Darkness" - Well written Haiku, Francine. - Have a nice Sunday evening. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)