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Outside the Box

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Outside the Box

She has a flaming spirit 
That could never be confined 
A burning creativity
That makes her daydreams shine

A hope for something better 
Only seen because she tries 
A long since dead idea
Resurrected by her eyes 

She looks right past our atmosphere 
It can't contain the sky
She's got a canvas stretching light-years
And a paintbrush that can fly

Every heartbreak that she's come across 
Is waiting now to dry
In a portrait she created 
To remind her of those times

There's a symphony she's hearing
To every other ear sublime 
A tune that can't live in the box 
But smashes all four sides

By Kyle Ezra Kriticos  

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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 4:13:00 PM
    Love the way you brought the images to life, very nicely done Kyle

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 1:08:00 PM
    Whoever inspired you to write this sounds pretty dang awesome ;) another favorite of course

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 10:28:00 AM
    I love the description in this! The title is good, the imagery makes it great!