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  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:42:00 PM
    Intrigued still !!!! I like your rhymes and the story line is fun to follow. Enjoyed !! I too am a bit reminded of the "Grinch" and "Whoville"....but I do like your savage tale !!

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:25:00 AM
    Sounds like a disaster in Grinch land John; makes me want to peek in and see how it all ends. We won't need a happy ending for this one! Something to wake me up this AM and get me going! :)

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:10:00 AM
    I'm off to root for the SAvages.

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 11:56:00 AM
    More... MORE... MORE...We want MORE! Oh OH! Can't help myself again... You do that to me... In stories I think I've hit the mother lode here!... Will be awaiting the next part... Love the 'to be continued' part... Fun read...PS. Did you notice I liked it?

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:49:00 AM
    this is so good John, a awesome tale to follow on, great look forward to that...

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 7:55:00 PM
    Alright! You must continue! Ya brought me a smile.:o)

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 4:58:00 PM
    i'm intrigued. i love the rhyme and flow of this - a cross between dr. seuss and tolkien. write some more!

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 3:06:00 PM
    Your imagination is awesome. Love those stories. Keep them coming, especially to continue on this one. Had to laugh at you. Love ya, Toquyen