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Rafting The Paradise

Today, I am a fighter 
Stood on a rusty truck, challenged the breezes in pace
Sensations crawled passed over my skin, blared
Like the troops of sky collapsed upon my face

Steep step on the edge of ravine
Rotten plums beneath my feet
Narrow path led downwards to the valley
Split over the beauty between hamlets and heaven

Above the inflatable boat, I am the captain
Greenish view anesthetize
Still I struggle against the tide
You conquer the boredom just in time

I met those black butterflies
Flew within their complexion highlighted wings
Pink and green as it was depicted in a dream
Amazement  is the secret weapon which you offer

You defeat the rage of our races

Again I need to climb upon my knees
Through the rocks which not stand appropriately
In this hum of stream I yearn it already
Summon me again when you ready to party

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  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Such creative writing you given us... love your style.... hugs Michael

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/18/2012 8:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Michael, and wished you a great day :) - Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 3:31:00 AM

    ‡ Love The Last Line, Call Me When Your Ready To Party, Sweet Beautiful Yanny. Also, Love The Image Of Blacked Winged Butterflies With Green And Pink Highlights Perhaps ? Her Lady's Passion Can Be Felt In Her Strength Desire Determination Etc. -- 'Rafting The Paradise,' Tis A Beautiful Title And Once More Your Beauty's Uniqueness Shines Through. 'You Defeat The Rage Of Our Races;' Wonderful, And If It Is Love Then, 'Beautiful!' My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/18/2012 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rachel, really glad that you were stop by :D, and will it be a surprise for you if I say those the black butterflies with highlighted green and pink wings were evidently real? XD I mean they are exist and I saw them with my own eyes, and they are gorgeous. :D