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Below is the poem entitled What a Trip which was written by poet Carl Fraser. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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What a Trip

There was a tornado siren screaming,
as the thunder crashed on high;
I was running from the monsters path,
But couldn't find a place to hide.

I felt the vacuum steal my breath,
and pull me to the blackened skies;
Traveling at a thousand feet per second,
and no one heard my cries.

It flung me violently back to Earth ,
and just as the ground crashed into my life;
I was awakened by the soft and gentle shake ,
from the hands of my loving wife.

I reached over to hug and kiss her,
and thank her for saving me;
Thats when two fangs grew from her mouth,
and she started biting me.

There was blood gushing from me everywhere,
I thought surely i will die;
But I awoke to a tornado siren screaming,
as the thunder crashed on high.
Carl A Fraser

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  1. Date: 11/18/2012 2:29:00 PM
    As Mandy says, that was quite a trip. A dream within a dream. Makes great reading though. Thans for the comments. Love, Joyce

    Fraser Avatar Carl Fraser
    Date: 11/18/2012 11:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joycei truly appreciate the comments
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 1:19:00 PM
    Oh wow what a trip this is Carl, love it xx thanks for your comment xx

    Fraser Avatar Carl Fraser
    Date: 11/18/2012 11:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Someone dared me to write about this so i took up the challenge, thanks for reading Mandy