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Poetic Tears

Paper rain showers over me...
With fallen letters drifting free...

Two words left on a scroll...
Page less thoughts left to hold...

Ticks on a clock still measure time...
From day to night it's a world of rhyme...
                             
Poetic tears that moisten my pen...
Dipped in the inkwell of now and then...

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  1. Date: 12/1/2012 8:04:00 AM

    Ahh the page and the pen, sometimes I think they are the only true friends I've got in my life. Wonderful poem Michael. -- Sean

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:37:00 AM

    You are a master poet!! I love how you penned your words Michael?

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 2:21:00 PM

    The title is very catchy!! and the picture you painted with words is great. - Dio

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:37:00 AM

    What a way you have with words.......very addictive reading your poetry :)

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:38:00 PM

    Wow.......amazing write. So expressive of the heart of a poet. Thank you for sharing this couplet! :) I enjoyed living through the imagery!

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 8:08:00 PM

    very nicely written...love the way you out this piece together!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 11/19/2012 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 11/19/2012 7:48:00 AM

    Gee! This is another superbly beautiful poem of yours Michael! Big congrats! Thank you so much again for sharing, your precious time visiting my work and your nice comments my dear friend! More power and blessings to you always! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 3:17:00 AM

    Excellent poem. Well done Michael.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:09:00 PM

    Hope the people in your life appreciate your magnificent nature....

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 6:35:00 PM

    Oh, beautiful write, Michael. I like "dipped in the inkwell of now and then..." It's true. It is a sum of who we are. Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 6:08:00 PM

    I love that soft nostalgic fade away into now and then, Michael. Lovely. As for my latest sonnet. I had to use those words Dalila gave us, so it was from HER mind that I got those ideas, indirectly you could say!!!

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:44:00 PM

    BRILLIANT!! Wow! I'm astonished when i read something like this.. and was not prepared...I suppose because I guess we haven't shared our poetry much. And I didn't realize your awesome talent! Thank you for dropping by my poems...I'm flattered.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:31:00 PM

    I really enjoyed this read Michael, and really true, sometimes if we think too hard the blank page will show up, but when we think nothing but tears, it will start to heat up the engine in your pen :) Lovely poem - Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:23:00 PM

    absolutely beautiful and touching .. sweet and tender those poetic tears Michael luv ... JG is very moved by your intimate emotion luv .. your words emit smiles for me .. and dry my tears .. returning luv and more more more as my favorite song says .. remember that one luv?? I dance to it everyday .. JG in dancing mode .. forever xoxo

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 3:02:00 PM

    Sometimes sorrow brings us closer Great write

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 2:15:00 PM

    Fantastic write, Michael! Enjoyed it much! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 1:05:00 PM

    just love this one, Michael - the last line is awesome

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 11:20:00 AM

    This is an amazing poem from you Michael.A deep write.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 10:11:00 AM

    I like the style of how you write similar to mines

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 9:10:00 AM

    This is very beautiful...poetry definitely takes hold of the poet. Thanks for the comment on my "Suicide and the Butterfly Boy!" xxxoo Holly

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 8:21:00 AM

    Emotive work that is packed with feeling..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your presence at my work..You presence there was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 8:04:00 AM

    Ink on paper depicts the thoughts of poets compared with tears, nicely done. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:30:00 AM

    Michael smooth romantic lines you have penned here, excellent...Dave

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 11:10:00 PM

    wow Michael a deep writing here. loved each line. hug? dinda.

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:02:00 PM

    Lovely poem makes me long for more, V

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 6:37:00 PM

    This is a great rhyme and I really enjoyed this Poetic Tears, simple but caught my feelings :), thank you Michael for your kindly visit to my page, it is really a pleasure :D - Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 4:40:00 PM

    ......nicely penned Michael...thanks for stopping by...

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 4:00:00 PM

    Brilliant, this is simply a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this superior and truly phenomenal poem this afternoon! There are definitely some poetic tears that I've shed in my lifetime, and there will be more to come I'm sure! What a powerful piece this one is Michael, Great Work!!

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/17/2012 4:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Russell your comments always lift my spirits.. even when I'm sure what I wrote was any good...thank you....
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 3:36:00 PM

    "Poetic tears that moisten my pen... Dipped in the inkwell of now and then..." I love this verse! I love all your Poem Micheal really so creative, Have a great week, Omneya

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/17/2012 4:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Hun... glad the words speak to you...xx
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 3:30:00 PM

    I really like the rthym of this one, in the last couplet the [that] is not needed :) Light and Love handsome

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/17/2012 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debbie are you flirting ??? lol all good....