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Fire and Ice

The fire burns as I sit in flames 
hammering out the next word. 
Smoke fills my eyes and brain 
as conversations fly high like a 
blue headed Monarch poking its
beak into the ground for seeds or
a misplaced worm. The fire never
ends but burns constantly, the rage
becomes too hot causing art and 
the fragrance of a rose to burn into
black ashes. There is a method to 
dealing with flame like capturing 
it in the base of a candle.

Then comes the ice which is cut into
cubes or flattens into the height of 
great rivers. Ice that will burn you 
like a flame or cut into you like a 
razor. Ice that leaves you cold and 
in want of a health and love. It will 
mark you under a cold, broken dream
where there is no advice only to hide
from it and find the warmth. 


Fire and Ice
Julie Heckman

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  1. Date: 1/14/2013 3:52:00 PM

    Nice poem, engages the mind to catagorise, emphasize different aspects contained within. Enjoyed reading and well worth a revisit.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:44:00 AM

    Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Julie! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Julie love xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:44:00 AM

    An excellent write!! Congrats my friend Julie on your winning poem. Cheers and Good day always!! Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 8:42:00 PM

    Julie, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:51:00 PM

    Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Julie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 2:24:00 PM

    Yes, everything hs a dark side as well as a light aspect...Light & Love