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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 2:31:00 PM

    fantastic Scribe ML true master pieces Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 1:56:00 AM

    the smile of Linda-Ku's....:-)...lol...linda

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 9:39:00 AM

    These are lovely, Scribe. I especially enjoyed the creativity of the continental roar!

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 3:37:00 PM

    lovely pen Scribe!

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 4:34:00 PM

    Great write you have here. Thanks for sharing with us. Many blessings and Merry Christmas. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 7:38:00 AM

    excellent! very clever

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:35:00 PM

    I enjoyed these, Scribe! But I especially LOVED the fifth. No 5 caught and held me, how perfect a description. Keep writing, keep exploring style and form. Keep the keyboard clicking! Smiles from Cyndi

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:36:00 PM

    Couldn't resist the title Marlon and I wasn't disappointed. Lots of imagination in each of these and I would find it hard to pick a favorite. Loved them all! :)

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 10:07:00 PM

    SCRIBE-KU'S SUPERB, love them.. Love always Carma

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 12/5/2012 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Had to come back haha!!! Still the best xoxo
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 12:42:00 PM

    Oh wow....how r u? These are delightful and full of cleverness!!! Swell job, Marlon!! gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:36:00 AM

    All very good! I like Reincarnation in particular. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 11:49:00 AM

    Scribe, I just love your array tonight. Hope you week is a brilliant one ;) tc Wilma

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 12:58:00 PM

    Oh my....lovely string of haiku !! Well done !!

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Perhaps you have created a new poetic style, anyways nicely done Marlon, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:36:00 AM

    Hi Scribe I am no expert just know what I like and I like these brilliant, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:32:00 AM

    I think they are exquisite Marlon, each has a special message that has personality and I love them all but perhaps the last is my fave. That's what I think! :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/26/2012 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Liz...
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:38:00 PM

    Stopping by to say hi,,,, was hoping to see a new poem from you. I'm reading the 4th haiku on this page,,, and I'm liking it ~rawrrrawrrrawrrrawrr xox~PD

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/26/2012 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol....Thanks PD! I got writers block. Need a good topic!
  1. Date: 11/24/2012 11:10:00 PM

    I enjoyed them anyway, Scribe Marlon...I'm no expert either, but I enjoy writing them. Thanks for the visit and I hope your Thanksgiving holiday was great. Always, Annalise

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/26/2012 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think they're crafty and witty. Thanks for stopping by!
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:43:00 AM

    lovely collection of quims. I don't know a damn think about haiku, I only know what I write. I did enjoy the ride.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/26/2012 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Dark Poetess! I'm in the same boat; loving to write!
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 7:08:00 AM

    Hey Marlon, I like these very much! I'm still learning about haiku...good to be reading you again...keep the ink flowing...(I especially like no 4)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/22/2012 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Christine! Will do!
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:52:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your work..I am not authority on Haiku so I can't help..You will just have to read up on how to write them..Just type in Haiku on your search engine for there is plenty of information out there..Sara

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/22/2012 7:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara!
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:38:00 AM

    Not my area of expertise but they look good to me, in fact still trying to find my area of expertise lol xx

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/22/2012 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy...I'm in the same boat, when it comes to expertise!
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:26:00 AM

    never tried Haiku's,looks like a challenge to take on,lol,nice writes Scribe,sorry can't help you bro lol

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/22/2012 7:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My first attempt also...Thanks RP!
  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:23:00 AM

    Number five no, but yet is the best of them all, the others could well be Haikus written in a straight line as in Japan.. but getting away from the form, these as poetry are awesome, Marlon....

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/22/2012 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry...
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 10:06:00 PM

    soup mail...

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 12:19:00 PM

    you really sweeten the 'ku pot... boiled to perfection, marlon... wow!..:) huggs!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/22/2012 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks poet...
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:44:00 AM

    Fabulous my dear scribe, I love it as always as I do all your stuff... Love Carma

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/18/2012 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's touching Carma! Thank you!
    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/18/2012 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The best haiku I've seen so far my SCRIBE- KU'S kudos
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 11:15:00 PM

    All your haiku's are the " BEST 'though you made some revisions my friend! I love the great feeling by which the image of nature brings in here! Thanks so much for sharing and your very wonderful comments on my poem. love/hugs, Leonora

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/18/2012 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Leonora, these are my first one's! I'm flattered!
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 10:56:00 PM

    A very nice poem my friend Marlon..I like it all. I don't care if its haiku or not as long as you written beautifully. thanks for sharing and thanks for dropping by on my poem. (^_^) Good Day! Love, Maria

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/18/2012 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Maria! You enjoy your day also!
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 6:48:00 PM

    Hola Scribe A KU".. LOL...i super love the title... gosh, you got me cheering for you.. I will not judge your ku's by rules.. LOL...I'm a ku breaker and would not have it any other way. I love #3 but but but,,, Number 5 kicks a$$... one of the best offspring image ever... of course. , The sweeter it is the better the attraction for me.. I meant 2 say bees.... nice to see you trying off haiku... xox~pd

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 11/17/2012 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Poet Destroyer!
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